Comments | theartoffic: Realistic Chapter 7

theartoffic

Realistic Chapter 7

Feb 11, 2009 22:39

Title: Realistic - Chapter Seven
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the future they are going to succeed. Realistics look real, feel ( Read more... )

realistic

Comments 40

justkimberly February 12 2009, 12:15:32 UTC

*sniffs and wipes eyes*

Awwwwwww....poor guy. I can't wait for the next installment. This story is wonderful! *hugs*

theartoffic February 12 2009, 16:05:55 UTC

*hands tissue*

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! *hugs* :D

jillian1127 February 12 2009, 14:45:24 UTC

This is so incredibly touching and moving-it's also so completely original and totally spellbinding! The characters are so well drawn and you feel so much for both Elijah and Orlando-and I love Tara! I was so glad to see more! Thanks for posting!

theartoffic February 12 2009, 16:08:23 UTC

I'm so grateful you think so!!! I really enjoyed exploring this world and what could be so I'm glad you're enjoying it too! *hugs* :D

lireeli February 12 2009, 18:13:30 UTC

Beautiful as ever, this story is so clever and moving it rocks my world!!
:)
I love this, I love to know there are going to be more!
And even if I completely understand why it's so hard for Lij to trust Orli, I DO trust him!! ;)
*hugs tight*

theartoffic February 12 2009, 21:16:10 UTC

I'm so glad you like it!! And yes, this is only half way so there will be more!
*hugs & squishes* :D

vienna80er February 12 2009, 21:34:27 UTC

I can really see where Lij comes from. And somehow I believe more in his theory than Orlando's promise.

theartoffic February 13 2009, 02:37:30 UTC

yup, poor Lij has reason to be afraid and his track record with owners is too long to be able to trust easily. Thanks for reading! *hugs* :D

_little_leaf February 13 2009, 17:12:25 UTC

Oh! I am so glad to see more chapters of this. It is so poignant and lovely.

theartoffic February 13 2009, 21:22:52 UTC

oh thank you so much! There will be more soon too :D *hugs*

_little_leaf February 13 2009, 22:36:36 UTC

You very successfully capture the way issues in a relationship can seem so transparent to people outside it while those in it are baffled, as well as the way an unusual relationship can only make sense to those who are part of it.

theartoffic February 14 2009, 17:02:26 UTC

this is so very true! I couldn't have articulated like you did - that that was what I was going for here, but it is! and I'm so glad you think I captured it!! *hugs* :D