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SIN - revenge [7/10]

Mar 25, 2012 17:05

title : sin [7/10]
pairing/fandom : alo x mini
rating : m for the series, pg-13 for this part
word count : 1750
summary : Mini and Alo find themselves dealing with sin in a way they never have before.

This one is set during 6x07.

revenge - the action of inflicting hurt or harm on someone for a wrong suffered at their hands

( This Mini was open, laughing and beaming as Alo pulled faces for her amusement. Smiling into his kisses. Their hair was messy and make-up was smudged across Mini’s face but neither seemed to care. )

mini/alo, fic

Comments 6

annacsn March 26 2012, 00:18:18 UTC

I can see this pretty much going on Alo's mind before he talks to Poppy and then. Awww, Mini was probably that devastated when she found out, I mean she couldn't be sure because it was Alo, but the evidences didn't help much. Great chapter!
Can't wait for 8. I have no idea how it is goinng to be!

Bye xx

theartistprince March 26 2012, 00:31:55 UTC

It broke my heart in the episode where everyone (BUT MY SWEET NICHOLAS) deleted Alo from facebook. Like.. you just drop your friend like that? smh.

I also wanted to redeem Franky a bit, tbh.

silentempathyx March 26 2012, 03:28:50 UTC

Perfect. I love you

theartistprince March 26 2012, 12:41:15 UTC

I love you too, bb ♥

two more chapters to be published today :|

byziinha March 26 2012, 11:56:07 UTC

LOVED the part with Franky, srly. One of the things I disliked the most in Skins is how they didn't develop the Alo-Rich-Franky friendship, it'd be so epic <3
Liked this chapter pretty much, can't wait for the next!
toodles!

theartistprince March 26 2012, 12:42:39 UTC

ia, I remember at the beginning of season five everyone called them the fab four. Then they kind of went their separate ways. Chapter nine is already done, I'm struggling with eight, though. Franky makes another appearance. I like writing her more than I thought I would.

The next two are coming out before the episode airs so :|