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SIN - pride [6/10]

Mar 25, 2012 14:02

title : sin [6/10]
pairing/fandom : alo x mini
rating : m for the series, pg-13 for this part
word count : 1800
summary : Mini and Alo find themselves dealing with sin in a way they never have before.

pride - pride or hubris is considered the original and most serious of the seven deadly sins, and the source of the others

( That Mini’s been watching too many American teen dramas and John Hughes movies now that she can’t go out and party with them. That Andrew McCarthy doesn’t exist and even if he did, doesn’t everyone really want Duckie in the end? )

mini/alo, fic

Comments 4

byziinha March 25 2012, 18:52:18 UTC

Oh boy... Favorite chapter by far. Seriously, so beautifully built, completely on character and... just so good, J. Loved!

theartistprince March 25 2012, 21:02:42 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm on a roll today, ngl.

annacsn March 25 2012, 23:52:24 UTC

Love it! This one is SO good. These missing moments just explain so much, you know. I was wondering... There are seven main sins right? Are you going to repeat some? It's not important, I was just curious... Anyway, going to read seventh chapter now!

Bye xx

theartistprince March 26 2012, 00:30:44 UTC

I didn't really stick to the Catholic sins or anything like that. I think this and lust might be the only ones. I only called it sin because it was a nicer word than "mistakes" or w/e lol!

It's a more secular idea of sin, I guess.

thanks for reading!