sin - lie

Mar 05, 2012 09:38

title : sin [5/10]
pairing/fandom : alo x mini
rating : m for the series, pg-13 for this part
word count : 2150
summary : Mini and Alo find themselves dealing with sin in a way they never have before.

lie - false statement made with deliberate intent to deceive; an intentional untruth; a falsehood

“This doesn’t mean anything,” she says harshly. )

mini/alo, fic, skins

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annacsn March 5 2012, 17:53:52 UTC
Awww, the first part was really cute. Totally lovely. But we all knew it wouldn't last. Alo and Mini's thoughts were so accurate... And I guess Mini would tell Franky in Nick's episode or maybe in Alo's, because she is the only one who knows. Well, anyway, this is perfect. I need the next one!

xx

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theartistprince March 5 2012, 18:46:04 UTC
The next one is going to be so hard because they were barely in it at all. It'll all be head canon instead of real canon. I'm thinking of dealing with pride or something.

Thanks for reading!

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silentempathyx March 5 2012, 18:05:44 UTC
That was beautiful. I really liked that you mentioned Mini and Franky (even if I hate Franky, I thought it was pretty sweet). The first part is my favorite. I can totally see them act like this all the time, if they end up together ;__;

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theartistprince March 5 2012, 18:48:04 UTC
I have a feeling the first part will be everyone's favourite. Enjoy it, because there's nothing cute about the next chapter probably. I haven't written it yet.

I don't like Franky either, but I needed an ending tbh lol

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byziinha March 5 2012, 22:53:19 UTC
Oh, I loved! Sad and adorable and heartbreaking, the way Malo has to be.

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theartistprince March 7 2012, 05:16:21 UTC
Yep and the way it'll be for a while. I'm going to try to come up with a happy idea for everyone. Happy you liked it!

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venecias March 6 2012, 00:47:32 UTC
I love you. Ugh, this...

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theartistprince March 7 2012, 05:16:42 UTC
I love you too! Thanks for reading my stuff :')

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theartistprince March 7 2012, 05:19:39 UTC
I had to write that first part because I'm so bad with straight drama I think. I need a little happiness. Glad you think that line was Alo-esque. I used to be so good at writing him last year but it's waned a little in favour for writing Mini so I'm a little wary of how he comes across.

I like the Franky/Mini friendship in theory, so I want to present it in a good light so I'm happy you liked it.

I fucking LOVED Alo's episode. I think it's probably my favourite of the season. Some much needed humour, imo.

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theartistprince March 8 2012, 15:06:51 UTC
I hope to have it done on the weekend. I'm trying to catch up on my Letters to Grace series. I only just posted the Franky chapter yesterday or something - so far behind.

I also what to write a Malo itunes type thing idk.

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