sin - selfishness

[theartistprince]

title : sin [2/10]
pairing/fandom : alo x mini
rating : m
word count : 1050
summary : Mini and Alo find themselves dealing with sin in a way they never have before.

selfishness - characterized by or manifesting concern or care only for oneself

Comments

[silentempathyx]

sadfasdajshdlajkshd. i'm so glad alo is taking care of mini. WELL DONE.

[theartistprince]

Well, he's trying anyway. It's easier to take care of Mini than to take care of Rich because Mini doesn't want to deal with it either.

That's probably a line I should have worked in the chapter.

[byziinha]

I'm liking it. They're way more edgy than any other fic I've read (or wrote, lol). It's a different point of view that makes a lot of sense.

[theartistprince]

I like that you said it was edgy. That wasn't necessarily the plan, but I'm digging it.

[theartistprince]

I was mad at him too, but I get that that's his process. He's trying his hardest and what he would do is distract himself. He never really faces anything that happens to him, like his parents and grades and whatever. He does something else instead.

I am firm in believing that he couldn't deal with it either and was trying his hardest and failing, because he is a fuck up.

[theartistprince]

I agree, it's rough. Gen 3 is the only gen I've really felt like I've had a semi-grasp on and even then it's really only Alo, Mini and Nick with Rich and Grace and sometimes Liv.

[venecias]

I quite liked it, dear :)

[theartistprince]

Why thank you!

[badjujuboo]

these are SUCH great little insights into what we've seen in the show and more. Loving this!

[theartistprince]

Thank you! That's so nice of you to say!

I hope you liked the rest of them as well. I hope to have the last part up by Friday.

Right now I'm working on a A/U fic, so we'll see how that goes. It's hugely long so far, though.