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The Unfinished Project by wildcat88

Jan 11, 2009 18:55

Challenge #: 1
Title: The Unfinished Project
Author: wildcat88
Rating: PG
Word count: ~3600
Characters: Rodney, John, Teyla, Ronon
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Disclaimer: I don't own them. More's the pity.
Spoilers: Spoilers through The Prodigal
Summary: A missing village and an unexpected find leaves the team trapped and injured. Rodney must risk everything to save them.
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wildcat88, fanfiction, challenge #1

Comments 21

abracah January 12 2009, 03:03:42 UTC

Great fic. I like what you did with the Hive creation idea. Really love the dialogue. I can hear them exactly. I also like that Rodney got to be the hero this time. He didn't want to, but he did it.

wildcat88 January 13 2009, 13:57:02 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate the comment on the dialogue. I'm always thrilled to hear the voices are right.

sp23 January 12 2009, 03:57:26 UTC

Oh, nicely done. I like the idea of Rodney buying time by filling the ship's database with useless Earth trivia, of which Rodney has an abundance! :-)

Very nice team fic, and lovely brave McKay.

wildcat88 January 13 2009, 14:00:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm delighted you liked it. All that useless trivia comes in handy sometimes.

silver_cyanne January 12 2009, 04:01:00 UTC

Aww, this is a lovely team fic. I always like it when Rodney gets to save the day, and I love how you pulled in Shine too.

wildcat88 January 13 2009, 14:01:44 UTC

Thanks! I'm so happy you liked it. Rodney saving the day never gets old. And The Shrine is one of my all-time favorite eps.

angw January 12 2009, 08:32:54 UTC

Fun banter. An angry wraith ship and a heroic Rodney :) I would hate to imagine what a nightmare the ship would have been with all of Rodney's memories and knowledge.

I am trying to imagine Ronon getting that pink goop out of his hair.

wildcat88 January 13 2009, 14:04:02 UTC

Thank you! I adore writing hero!Rodney. I'm glad you liked it. Ronon proudly wore the pink goop in his hair for a while before Teyla insisted he wash it out. Good thing those Ancients knew how to build high pressure showers. :D

angw January 14 2009, 07:24:13 UTC

Well the Ancients were good for somethings - not every invention was a mystery that ended up biting them in the butt. Unless there is an unknown high pressure shower story that includes a little whump....

leesa_perrie January 12 2009, 14:47:46 UTC

I loved the banter at the beginning! Especially the jibe about Rodney talking more than all the Genii put together!! *bg*

Of course, I love hero-Rodney! Excellent idea, and well written as ever! And Ronon gets to save them all by blowing things up *snerk*!! Oh, and he might have used more C4 than Rodney said!!

The last few lines are just sooo Rodney!

They were alive and relatively unscathed. That was all he really needed.

That and a Nobel Prize. - LOL!!!

wildcat88 January 13 2009, 14:06:31 UTC

Thank you so much! I love banter between the boys. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. The final line was a last minute addition. Thanks for letting me know it worked.