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The Unfinished Project by wildcat88

Jan 11, 2009 18:55

Challenge #: 1
Title: The Unfinished Project
Author: wildcat88
Rating: PG
Word count: ~3600
Characters: Rodney, John, Teyla, Ronon
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Disclaimer: I don't own them. More's the pity.
Spoilers: Spoilers through The Prodigal
Summary: A missing village and an unexpected find leaves the team trapped and injured. Rodney must risk everything to save them.
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wildcat88, fanfiction, challenge #1

Comments 21

linzi5 January 12 2009, 21:40:22 UTC

This was lovely and really tense and exciting too. I just love team stories and you got that great team dynamic spot on for me here! I'd love to have seen Ronon with the pink gunk in his hair, hehe! LOL! Well done and thanks for sharing! :)

wildcat88 January 13 2009, 14:07:48 UTC

Thank you! I'm so thrilled you liked it. I love team stories. There can never be enough of them.

trishkafibble January 14 2009, 05:20:37 UTC

Adorable! I love it! ^^

wildcat88 January 14 2009, 13:46:12 UTC

Hee! Thanks!

scarym1 January 15 2009, 21:15:19 UTC

Cool Story. I would love for it to have been longer. More Angst for the team as save Rodney. I thought the last line about a Nobel Prize was funny.

wildcat88 January 19 2009, 15:59:08 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. To see more team angst would have required a POV change which didn't fit in the story. However-

John groaned as he rolled on his side then sat up quickly, heart pounding, when he spotted Teyla unconscious on the floor. The ship shook and a gut-wrenching scream snapped his attention to the console.

"Oh, God."

Rodney was glued to the panel, eyes rolled back in his head, convulsing. John scrambled to his feet. They hadn't been able to tear Teyla away. How the hell-

Rodney screamed again, less forcefully this time, his body sagging. John did the only thing he could: he tackled Rodney. The scream cut off in mid-yelp and they hit the floor in a limp pile.

John clicked his radio. "Ronon, where are you?"

"On my way.John pressed shaking fingers to Rodney's neck. A pulse - faint, thready - answered back. But his chest wasn't moving ( ... )

nuetronorange February 23 2009, 08:10:32 UTC

Loved this story, both parts, I just thinking I needed to read a good team fic, maybe with some whumping and along comes yours with Rodney saving the day too!

Thank you.

wildcat88 February 24 2009, 23:37:44 UTC

Thank you! I'm delighted you enjoyed the story (and the addition). Good to hear it scratched that team fic itch you were having.

astridv October 10 2009, 13:19:18 UTC

Information was pulled out, pieced together, accepted, rejected. He fought against it, redirecting the search down paths cluttered with movie quotes, song lyrics, his mother’s brownie recipe.

Heh. That's a cool plot idea. Great teamfic!

wildcat88 October 11 2009, 20:41:50 UTC

Thanks! That Rodney is a tricky one. I love the team together.