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argentine65 February 6 2016, 18:44:15 UTC
What an imagination¡ They are really in love and they are going to build a life together. But from a woman POV it must be tough not only being cheated but being cheated with a man. Thank you so much for sharing. Martha

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the_rant_girl February 6 2016, 19:08:06 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and leaving some love ♥♥ Though well their gender doesn't really matter so much here, but for the girls they needed some part of their guys to be just theirs. Something they could offer that the boys couldn't just get from each other. And when the boys do take that step, it forces them to realise that they want to be someone's Jared or Jensen. And man was it just a little bit kind of hard for me to write it this way, because I much prefer to have these 4 be polyamorous. But that was not what this story, or the wonderful art, called for. Will stop myself before rambling takes over. But uh yes, thanks again!! MWA!! ♥

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deanshot February 14 2016, 13:10:15 UTC
You did such a good job writing this. I know you went out of your comfort zone to do it also. While I was very happy for our boys being happy at the end, I was also sad for the girls because you could feel their pain but I am so glad that they all remained friends in the end.

Sorry I am so late in commenting also.

Looking forward to what else you write over the coming months.

*hugs*

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the_rant_girl February 16 2016, 00:37:25 UTC
Ahhhh, thank you my lovely, so, so much. Heh yeah funny what decides to slap you in the muse area sometimes lol

And ah yeah I....that's the part I struggle with. The girls. Because well they absolutely one hundred percent belong with their guys and well yeah I would sooo much rather have them be a happy poly foursome. Their pain here is pretty cosmic, seismic maybe even, and I definitely felt it. I mean it's actually kind of upsetting to even really think about right now. But you gotta listen to what the story tells you to do right? And of course even though the boys are happy, and of course they have each other, I think the pain of the loss would still be able to sneak up and knock them for six sometimes too.

ok must stop rambling lol

all my love *smishes and squishes and clings*

♥♥♥♥

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