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frostfalcon May 1 2013, 02:04:05 UTC
dark and hot... thanks for sharing!

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the_rant_girl May 1 2013, 20:31:38 UTC
Thanks so much! ♥!!

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fourtenpm May 1 2013, 02:59:55 UTC
wow, this is something else. more to come?

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the_rant_girl May 1 2013, 20:38:47 UTC
aha there are no current plans for expansion, but thank you so very much! ♥!!

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dimeliora May 1 2013, 05:16:36 UTC
This was so very dark and so very good.

I just...wow. The possessiveness is a big thing for me, and yet it's so rarely portrayed without a heavy amount of schmoop attached. I'm just so impressed I'm kind of speechless.

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the_rant_girl May 1 2013, 20:37:15 UTC
Ah, thank you so very much, I'm really very pleased you liked it, and well admittedly I kind of like my schmoopy possessiveness, lol but schmoop certainly had no place here, gotta do what the story tells you, lol ♥!!

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big_heart_june May 1 2013, 08:05:41 UTC
Oh my fucking god, darling! you did it! eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! and it is SOOOOOOO GOOD, I can't even....I LOVE every single thing, this world you have created here is brilliant, so wonderfully dark and amazing and your Danneel is fantastic as is Chris and evil Jeff and Misha and you even got Ty in here! :D Jared is absolutely gorgeous, I LOVE HIM SO MUCH but our boy Jensen is what really gets me! UGH BB! such an asshole! vuejblafjsfklfjalfkaf! you nailed him! he's fucking perfect, all hot and powerful and so deliciously possessive *shivers* LOVE the filthy mouth on him, ugh ugh ugh! such a kink...
Their kiss at the end is perfection *touches heart* I really really love it, love that Jensen initiated it ♥

WOW, I've been looking forward to this for weeks and it's everything I hoped it would be and more ♥ THANK YOU, MY LOVE ♥ ILU and this sfm, you are THE BEST. For serious. Ugh ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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big_heart_june May 1 2013, 10:54:57 UTC
Re-reading....their first scene together, I could hardly wait to read it! ugh it's soo very very hot. Beautifully done.

Jensen moved round to the front of his desk and half sat, half leaned back against the edge and he reached out with his hand following the curve of Jared’s chest and abdomen with it without actually touching him. But Jared still shivered as if he had, the ghost of sensation tickling along the surface. Jensen stopped when he got to the waistband of the jeans and he tugged the zip slider between his thumb and ring finger.

“Take them off,” was Jensen’s quiet command and when he looked up at Jared through his eyelashes Jared almost forgot how to breathe God his eyes he wasn’t sure how he was going to handle them at closer range.

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the_rant_girl May 1 2013, 21:05:38 UTC
Already re-reading huh BB? ;P =D and since I clearly forgot my head in the last comment I would like to doubly thank you *nods and smishes and smoochifies* Thank you my Love! glad you liked that part heee ♥

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the_rant_girl May 1 2013, 21:01:17 UTC
=DDDDDDDD HEEEEEEE! *smishes you hard and then jumps up and down with you* AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! HONEY YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW OH SO VERY HAPPY THIS COMMENT MAKES ME! I was totally freaking out after I posted lol *clings* ahhh seriously I'm so happy that you like it BB and I totally LOVE YOU SO FUCKING MUCH TOO! *nods emphatically* and I'm like ecstatic that you loved my Danneel heeeee! and well I had fun in creating all the characters, some almost tempted me into branching out into offshoots lol and I so wanted to include Ty lol he's like magical lol

And of course I'm bouncy shiny happy that you love the boys, and that Jensen's assholishness shined through LMAO and that the kiss worked *dances* all part of the claiming lol and well also Jared's worked his way under Jensen's skin too, but it won't change Jared's position. Ahh I'm so glad it lived up to your expectations honey *clings* ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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tmn1966 May 1 2013, 10:12:09 UTC
Oh honey, you know how much I love this. You're one of the very, very few that could get me to read dark fic and although I had to squint through some of it, you really did such a fantastic job. And you know I want more, but this was satisfying and you made me like and care about almost everyone - Mr. Morgan can go take a long walk off a short pier as far as I'm concerned. That's all because of your writing, sweetie.

This is perfect. The interactions between the characters and especially how so perfectly you captured each and every one. Need I say that Mark had a bit of Luci in him? So chilling. And poor Misha and Danneel (and in my head they definitely want to head south of the border haha :P). Rob the doorman and Chris the bodyguard, even JPS as the mayor - they are just so wonderfully drawn by your words. My favorites, of course are Jared and Jensen, Danneel and Misha. :)

This was hot and dark and exciting and sad. Like I said. Perfection. ♥♥♥

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the_rant_girl May 1 2013, 21:18:55 UTC
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *glomps* My darling Terilicious ;P BWA HA HA HA! What oh what would I do without you? For all your friendly poking and gentle prodding and for your lovely and very much needed support and to add on top of that this awesome comment, I say THANK YOU SO FUCKING MUCH! LOVE YOU BB! *clings* ♥♥

and =DD you know it's my life's missionjob to lure you to the dark side, heeeeee! Thank you for sticking with me and bwa ha, poor Jeff, lmfao....it would solve so many problems though.....;P

And I'm so very glad that you love my characters honey and that they seemed believable to you *twirls* and I'm extra happy you liked Mark...of found him chilling, whatever LOL ;P

and interesting, so we have a tie,

Mexico: 1

Canada: 1

LOL

;P

♥♥♥

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