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tebtosca May 1 2013, 14:52:33 UTC
So, so good! Dark and delicious, and I love how you managed to flesh out all of the side characters, even with minimal words.

Great job, bb! <3

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the_rant_girl May 1 2013, 21:30:10 UTC
=DD Thank you so much bb! That means so much and haha I might have gone a little crazy in places with the backstory creation in my head lol ♥!!

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meesasometimes May 1 2013, 17:35:29 UTC
*eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek*
oh baby, you have outdone yourself!!!! Everyone, Danneel, Chris, Misha, Pellegrino's, JENSENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!! Jared stripping and bending over had me weak at the knees :P The Texas drawl!!!
Have I told you lately that I love you?

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the_rant_girl May 1 2013, 21:46:43 UTC
Bwa ha! =DD Love you too kitten *spanks* ;P heee I'm happy that you liked those things (othwise known as a naked obedient Jared lol) and *dances* for the Pellegrino appreciation LOL Thank you BB! *licks* ♥!!

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firesign10 May 2 2013, 03:21:53 UTC
Wow, terrific! Plans to continue here?

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the_rant_girl May 2 2013, 21:32:39 UTC
=D Thank you! And well not not really, or well I certainly wouldn't say I had plans, and definitely not for the immediate future, there are facets of the world that intrigue me, but I have other stories that I have to and want to finish so uh yeah haha. ♥!!

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zara_zee May 2 2013, 08:09:45 UTC
This was awesome. Very edgy with a definite noir feel to it. Enjoyed it a lot.

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the_rant_girl May 2 2013, 21:35:36 UTC
=DD Oh I do so love this comment, noir was definitely the feel I wanted to be felt haha, wasn't sure where I landed so it pleases me tremendously that you did Thank you ♥!!

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dugindeep May 2 2013, 13:22:22 UTC
This felt like a very satisfying sucker punch, if that makes any sense lol. I did not imagine this to be the tone you took, but the surprise of it made it even more delicious. I really love the way you set up some of the narration, added to the angsty undertones.

I know you said you wouldn't really add to it, but I insist you do :D

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the_rant_girl May 2 2013, 21:56:49 UTC
Ha! well I'm glad it hit you the right way LOL ;P Thank you honey =D abd well as I just said above, if I was going to add more it won't be any time soon, I've got other stories I want/need to get back to and finish, but there are avenues within the verse that intrigue me,so *shrugs* lol haha ♥!!

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