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Through The Lens

Sep 07, 2010 22:47

Title: Through The Lens
Pairing: Jensen/Danneel {no sex}, Jensen/Jared
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4542
Summary: Written for the prompt given by dephigravity on the Working Hard for the Money meme: Jared and Jensen have always had an unspoken attraction to each other but have never acted on it. In the days leading up to Jared's wedding, Danneel reveals to ( Read more... )

pairing: jared/genevieve, genre: first kiss, character: jared padalecki, pairing: jensen/danneel, genre: pwp, challenge: working hard for the money, kink: voyeurism, genre: first time, pairing: jensen/jared, genre: dub-con, character: danneel harris ackles, fandom: cwrpf, genre: slash, bottom!jared, kink: blowjob, character: jensen ackles, kink: fingering, warning: infidelity, medium: fic

Comments 5

rozabellalove September 16 2010, 16:52:13 UTC

Mmm, yummy blackmailing videoing goodness

loved this line: “Because I wouldn’t want you to be remembered as the guy who kicked the world’s biggest puppy.”

sweet little puppy Jared - aww bless!

the_rant_girl September 17 2010, 15:53:15 UTC

hehe, thank you so very, very much *grins*

and haha, well he does have those big ole puppy eyes, and well you know lol

they are both the sweetiest *nods*

tmn1966 February 11 2012, 09:19:32 UTC

This was hot and so very sweet.

I really liked the beginning, the intimacy and laughter between Jensen and Danneel. Then later, the shyness of each of the boys, the boldness of Danneel, and the tenderness and unspoken communication the boys shared.

I love, love, love this part:

Jared couldn’t stop himself, he reached across the table placing his hand over Jensen’s, dipping his head as he tries to get his best friend to look at him, something odd stirring in the pit of his stomach. It’s like he’s seeing Jensen for the first time. The gesture of the hand over hand, and Jared dipping his head... guh, it just gets to me. It's so intimate in its familiarity, yet there's the discovery of seeing something new Jared hadn't seen before ( ... )

the_rant_girl February 11 2012, 14:22:13 UTC

Awwww thanks honeycakes (what? I am totally not channelling Lorne from Angel, I'm not *coughs*) *grins* I love all the things you love and I especially love that you picked up on the not being rushed vibe, because I didn't want them to you know, and they wouldn't let me rush them either haha, I think at one point I was kind of wanting to finish the story before I went to bed, which I didn't, I left it and went back to it the following day, but I was kind of like "come on guys can't we make this quick and dirty" and they just shook their heads and laughed at me all "not a chance in hell" and so things were kept at their pace lol ( ... )

tmn1966 February 11 2012, 14:30:53 UTC

I love Lorne!!! I didn't watch Angel when it originally aired, only been watching it over the last few months on reruns. Lorne is awesome. :)