Through The Lens

[the_rant_girl]

Title: Through The Lens
Pairing: Jensen/Danneel {no sex}, Jensen/Jared
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4542
Summary: Written for the prompt given by dephigravity on the Working Hard for the Money meme: Jared and Jensen have always had an unspoken attraction to each other but have never acted on it. In the days leading up to Jared's wedding, Danneel reveals to

Comments

[tmn1966]

This was hot and so very sweet.

I really liked the beginning, the intimacy and laughter between Jensen and Danneel. Then later, the shyness of each of the boys, the boldness of Danneel, and the tenderness and unspoken communication the boys shared.

I love, love, love this part:

Jared couldn’t stop himself, he reached across the table placing his hand over Jensen’s, dipping his head as he tries to get his best friend to look at him, something odd stirring in the pit of his stomach. It’s like he’s seeing Jensen for the first time.

The gesture of the hand over hand, and Jared dipping his head... guh, it just gets to me. It's so intimate in its familiarity, yet there's the discovery of seeing something new Jared hadn't seen before.

The other thing I loved about this is that it didn't feel rushed. You kept that intimate vibe throughout the piece, the touches, the hushed words. I may sound dorky for saying this, but I'm glad Danneel wasn't obtrusive, even though she orchestrated it, she stayed on the fringes mostly.

Very beautifully written first time. <33333

[the_rant_girl]

Awwww thanks honeycakes (what? I am totally not channelling Lorne from Angel, I'm not *coughs*) *grins* I love all the things you love and I especially love that you picked up on the not being rushed vibe, because I didn't want them to you know, and they wouldn't let me rush them either haha, I think at one point I was kind of wanting to finish the story before I went to bed, which I didn't, I left it and went back to it the following day, but I was kind of like "come on guys can't we make this quick and dirty" and they just shook their heads and laughed at me all "not a chance in hell" and so things were kept at their pace lol

And I don't think that makes you sound dorky, it's quite a while since I wrote this, but I don't know I think it was important to me that what was important to Danneel was that Jensen was happy, and ok she partly just wanted to see them have at it, lol but I think you know being right there she'd feel that electricity/intimacy/tenderness between the boys and ultimately she didn't want to upset it, or mar their first time any more than she sort of already did lol

[tmn1966]

I love Lorne!!! I didn't watch Angel when it originally aired, only been watching it over the last few months on reruns. Lorne is awesome. :)