Fic: Light Up The Sky [Kirk/Spock, PG]

[the_moonmoth]

Title: Light Up The Sky
Author: The Moonmoth
Rating: PG
Pairing: Kirk/Spock, pre-slash
Words: ~3,700
Spoilers: Star Trek 2009
Warnings: none
Summary: Jim finds Spock’s quarters to be overly warm, and so he removes his gold tunic and pushes up the sleeves of his undershirt before they begin. Spock is now very well accustomed to the sight of Jim’s

Comments

[daphnie_1]

Woha, this is all shades of awesome.

For starters your Kirk voice fills me with GLEE. His dialogue is perfect. I really like how you describe the melds, there is just something so beautiful and etherial about it, and about the construction of the landscape in Kirk's head (how *perfect* it would take on the form of the Enterprise in the end.

Just perfect.

NGL though, I'm sort of shipping Spock/Garven and I don't quite know why.

[the_moonmoth]

Kirk's voice \o/ I find him a little difficult sometimes, so I'm esp glad you liked.

I'm sort of shipping Spock/Garven and I don't quite know why.

Heh, I went off on a few mental tangents while writing that, and I think it probably shows! I think there may be backstory there at some point.

Thank you for your lovely comment <3

[the_moonmoth]

Thank you :) The original request for the first fic was an in-depth description of Spock and Kirk's first meld, and I never felt I quite got there. Hence this fic :)

[the_moonmoth]

I thought Spock melding with his Betazoid roommate was pretty hot.

Lol, you're not the only one to think that! There is some backstory there that I may or may not write, but I definitely think Garven developed a bit of a thing for Spock ;)

I really love that you felt you went somewhere alien - that's a huge compliment. Thank you.

[the_moonmoth]

he reader (and Jim) see more of Spock than he knows he's revealing.

I'm really glad you thought that. Thanks for the lovely comment :)

[the_moonmoth]

this seems like a very believable way for Kirk and Spock to begin developing that epic relationship

Thank you :D The way you go from abject loathing to professional co-operation to a FRIENDSHIP/LOVE FOR THE AGES really kind of fascinates me, so I'm glad it worked for you.