Comments | the_moonmoth: Fic: Light Up The Sky [Kirk/Spock, PG]

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Fic: Light Up The Sky [Kirk/Spock, PG]

Mar 08, 2010 20:14

Title: Light Up The Sky
Author: The Moonmoth
Rating: PG
Pairing: Kirk/Spock, pre-slash
Words: ~3,700
Spoilers: Star Trek 2009
Warnings: none
Summary: Jim finds Spock’s quarters to be overly warm, and so he removes his gold tunic and pushes up the sleeves of his undershirt before they begin. Spock is now very well accustomed to the sight of Jim’s ( Read more... )

fandom: star trek reboot, fanfiction, pairing: kirk/spock

Comments 24

elfsausage March 8 2010, 21:44:14 UTC

Just. Wow. This is a beautiful piece of writing! Your characters are spot on, and the description of what's going on in their minds is gorgeous. I hope you're going to continue with this, because there's SO much you could do with this! Thanks for sharing :-)

the_moonmoth March 8 2010, 22:21:26 UTC

I have a couple of ideas for sequels floating around that may or may not get written. I kind of want to take them to Betazoid.

I'm really glad you enjoyed :)

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the_moonmoth March 9 2010, 18:49:20 UTC

Thanks!

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the_moonmoth March 9 2010, 18:49:37 UTC

Thank you :)

heeroluva March 9 2010, 09:19:36 UTC

Wow. I love the explanations of all the different melds. You took a simple idea and made it so much more. The layers of complexity that build as Spock goes through each one is amazing. Thank you for a job well done!

the_moonmoth March 9 2010, 18:50:42 UTC

You're welcome :) This was really the heart of the idea I had for your prompt, even though it didn't make it into your story, so I'm really glad you liked it.

noein9 March 9 2010, 09:30:34 UTC

Wowzers.

The way you descrivbe the immediate intimacy of mind melding is what really sold this for me. The unspoken beauty of Spock's parents' love and regard for their son was just perfect. Spock's admiration of his father, especially comes through.

I like the way Uhura's thoughts are described- lightening quick, beautiful, unfamiliar. And such quicksilver beauty slipped through his fingers- yikes!

Describing Jim and Spock together was just beautigul- the way Spock can discern how Jim once felt unsafe and insecure, how Jim can pick up Spock's not so hidden ways of thinking and moving- perfect.

A friendship to define- and describe- them both.

Wonderful.

the_moonmoth March 9 2010, 19:04:13 UTC

The way you descrivbe the immediate intimacy of mind melding is what really sold this for me.

Thank you so much, that's exactly what I was going for. And thank you for your lovely comment :)