Comments | the_moonmoth: Request Fic 1

the_moonmoth

Request Fic 1

Jan 20, 2010 19:32

For 01100100, for the prompt McCoy/Kirk. Mission gone wrong, cranky McCoy, nonchalant Jim. Oh and making out!

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Kirk/McCoy, PG, ~900 words

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pairing: kirk/mccoy, fandom: star trek reboot, fanfiction

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the_moonmoth January 20 2010, 20:59:23 UTC

Gah! Forgot my italics there.

And thanks :-D

archaeologist_d January 20 2010, 21:55:44 UTC

Love the tension and the way Bones was always looking at him.

LOL about the standing too close. So true!

the_moonmoth January 20 2010, 22:29:22 UTC

Hee! Glad you liked :)

siluria January 20 2010, 22:46:31 UTC

Very nicely done!! I love the subtleness, and that perfectly accompanying line about him always standing too close!! I think I shall be sneaking this into my bookmarks :)

the_moonmoth January 21 2010, 01:20:01 UTC

\o/ Glad you liked it

secretsolitaire January 21 2010, 00:23:34 UTC

“You’re awake,” he said. He scowled. “You dumb shit.”

Heh. That is so Bones.

Enjoyed this! Nice and understated.

the_moonmoth January 21 2010, 01:20:28 UTC

Hee! What's love without a little verbal abuse? :)

rubynye January 21 2010, 01:45:45 UTC

*sighs delightedly*

the_moonmoth January 21 2010, 21:06:46 UTC