Comments | the_moonmoth: Request Fic 1

the_moonmoth

Request Fic 1

Jan 20, 2010 19:32

For 01100100, for the prompt McCoy/Kirk. Mission gone wrong, cranky McCoy, nonchalant Jim. Oh and making out!

Insusceptible
Kirk/McCoy, PG, ~900 words

( Insusceptible )

pairing: kirk/mccoy, fandom: star trek reboot, fanfiction

Comments 17

samueljames January 21 2010, 20:36:28 UTC

Awww, lovely.

the_moonmoth January 21 2010, 21:06:56 UTC

Thanks!

blcwriter January 21 2010, 21:45:43 UTC

Oh. YES.

I lack coherence for an appropriate comment. That doesn't mean this isn't just GRAND.

the_moonmoth January 22 2010, 17:53:42 UTC

Hee! Thank you :)

weepingnaiad January 22 2010, 13:24:50 UTC

Beautifully done! Very much them.

the_moonmoth January 22 2010, 17:54:07 UTC

I'm glad it rang true :)

danahid January 22 2010, 13:26:54 UTC

Not my usual pairing to read, but lovely nonetheless. This:

“Bones,” he said. ‘I’m sorry’ floated on the tip of his tongue, but ultimately he wasn’t, and Bones had always been insusceptible to Jim’s bullshit.

“Yeah,” McCoy said anyway, eyes scanning over Jim’s face. “I know.” Then he got up and leaned down and whispered, “but at least you’re going to come back to me,” and kissed him.

was a particularly nice way to show how much they love and care for and understand each other.

Very nice!

the_moonmoth January 22 2010, 17:55:32 UTC

Not my usual pairing, either, but it was fun to write. I think this pairing is very much based on understanding each other, so I'm pleased that came through.