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xoxo_qui March 14 2011, 04:02:11 UTC
This was like a short story and I love it! I didn't think I could fall deeper for him but you've just proven me wrong!

I'm glad that Troy is gone but I'd like to slap her!
Because he feels he wouldn't be a good father, he would be an excellent one! I can see him approaching the job with caution and an open mind for whatever may happy!

Even more now, I wish for his happiness!!

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the_mctavishams March 15 2011, 03:16:51 UTC
haha aww yay I'm glad you enjoyed this, Qui!! I knew you would.. you've been waiting for it for a minute!! haha

I'm glad Troy is gone too. She annoyed me haha :P

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deagh March 14 2011, 04:18:28 UTC
Lovely job on the skin! (or whatever you did)

You know, it's funny, but you do a good job of communicating this stuff within your story, I felt like you weren't telling me anything I hadn't already gotten out of your narrative. (This is a compliment, btw)

Sometimes I think I should do these for mine, but they haven't even *told* me everything yet, the little dorks.

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the_mctavishams March 15 2011, 03:19:54 UTC
Thank you! I made the skin, yes, and NECKS ARE HARD TO DO just sayin'.

I still need to fix some things on it though. I'm not really happy about the seams of the underarms and stuff. But other than that, it turned out pretty hot ;)

And aww I *totally* take that as a compliment! Thank youuu. I'm glad I could get some of his past into the context and not lose the reader. That's muy importante. :)

Uh, I'll let you in on a secret; mine don't either... not until I sit down to write these things. I know some, but not all... not until I let them write it through me.

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anonymous March 14 2011, 04:36:06 UTC
Carlos, how do you feel about finding Christiana now that you are sent sent to Covena? Do you feel self-conscieous about her seeing you after the accident? Do you want her to see you?

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the_mctavishams March 15 2011, 03:20:41 UTC
Thanks Anon- I'll post his answer when I get home (I'm not on my base computer right now). Great questions!! :D

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ext_172617 March 14 2011, 07:20:42 UTC
Argh, stupid Troy! I knew I disliked her for a reason. ;)

I was actually meaning to ask about Carlos and Lizzie when I was thinking about SL the other day. And then this character study comes up and answers every single one of my questions. It was like you read my mind, lol!

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the_mctavishams March 15 2011, 03:21:27 UTC
LOL yayy Glad I answered them!! :)

Thanks Carla!!

.. (just wrote your name as Carlas... I think I'm tired...)

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miss_nyxie March 14 2011, 14:02:58 UTC
Ugh Troy. What a b***h!

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the_mctavishams March 15 2011, 03:22:09 UTC
LOL To leave him like that? I agree :P But it's all for the best, in my opinion. And to be honest, he didn't really care anyway.

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