Comments | the_grynne: GG fic: Pick-up Lines

the_grynne

GG fic: Pick-up Lines

Sep 13, 2005 08:16

Lane and Paris.

Awkwardness, food allergies, mutual distain for MTV. So much randomness it ought to be banned. I have a horrible sense of humour, so this was probably a really really bad idea.

Written for voleuse's Gilmore Girls Ficathon.

( Someone has been watching way too much crappy network television. )

my fic, ficathon, fic-gilmore girls, fic challenge

Comments 4

so_spiffed September 12 2005, 16:38:34 UTC

I'm amused. :)

the_grynne September 12 2005, 19:06:09 UTC

I've done my work. :)

zarahemla September 14 2005, 22:20:42 UTC

Ha! I really like this, because Paris and Lane are both clearly distinguishable. I can read a random paragraph and know exactly who is speaking when. Congratulations! That's a real accomplishment in my opinion.

the_grynne September 15 2005, 23:56:18 UTC

Wow, that's a really appreciated compliment, because if there was one thing that had me panicking about writing this, it was that I hadn't seen the show in a long while and I'd forgotten just what gave that distinctiveness to each character's words. I was afraid the two characters would be indistinguishable, which would have made the dialogue-only format of the story even more pretentious. So, thank you.