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[onlystarchild]

~ e.e. cummings, “somewhere i have never traveled” (LVII), 17-19.

01.     Motion

The minister has been talking excruciatingly long about how life will not only continue on but will bring with it new beginnings and new hope, but all ten year old Virgil can do is gaze at the closed lid of the casket and think about all he has lost.

02.

Comments

[tobiasdominik]

*Squeals*

Really, that's all I've got for ya

[onlystarchild]

Hehe, thanks. *Squeals* make me quite happy inside.

I really enjoyed this!

[dragonsquill]

Lots of fun to read. And, hey, I just appreciate that you KNOW they're run-on sentences! I especially liked...49. Hunger, for having a nice mix of sexual and romantic. Nicely done!

Re: I really enjoyed this!

[onlystarchild]

Yay, thanks for the comment. :)

Yeah, I think only like 5 of the prompts are actually proper sentences . . . heh. We'll just ignore the fact that I majored in English in college, right?

[__itsawarinhere]

Damn. That was beautiful.

I was completely entranced as I read it, I forgot I was even listening to music at the time, I was so captivated.

It's so great to see new Static Shock fic. :)

Fantastic job!

[onlystarchild]

Hearing that one's writing knocked a reader out of reality for a bit is one of the best comments an author can get. Yay!

Thank you! :)

[eternalobed]

another great fic here. nice and different concept. unique. i like how limited this format is, really forces the reader and writer to focus on the essence of the story and their relationship. of course this relationship has been explored so much and has become a bit predictable by now, it's still just so.....interesting and sweet and romantic and....great. lol. good job, really love it.

[onlystarchild]

It's great to hear that my take on our boys is unique, especially because -- like you said -- the V/R relationship really has been explored a lot already.

Thanks! <3

[onlystarchild]

Hehe, glad to provide some good 'ole VR lovin'.

Thanks!