Fatal Mistakes,

[the_dead_dream]

Title: Fatal Mistakes.
Characters/Pairings: None.
Rating: PG-13?
Disclaimer: I own absolutely nothing!
Warnings: Character death!

Comments

[oc_gambit2]

arrrrggghhhhhh! Devastating.

In the best possible way. Thank you. *sniffles*

[the_dead_dream]

Thanks. =)

[viper209n]

I liked this. An enjoyable 'What if.' That makes me sound like a horrid person but what can I say? I love the angst.

So sad but so good.

[the_dead_dream]

Thank you.

[beachtree]

That's heartwrenching, painful and soulful. The message and the emotion eclipses any of the "mistakes" that are certainly minimal and secondary to the characters and their shared story.

As hard as this sort of outcome can be to read, and as horrible for any and all of the characters involved, from Ryan- who paid the ultimate price- to those forced to confront and live with their choices and roles, it's powerful and thought-provoking.

Thanks for tackling- and sharing something so moving.

[the_dead_dream]

Thank you so much.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[beachtree]

Thanks again. However distressing Ryan's horrible fate and the unsettling subject matter, the fact was that he had beem cast aside and was deemed expendable, so his situation really was desperate.

I hope you continue with your writing.

[the_dead_dream]

Exactly.

I hope I can continue my writing to.

[fifimom]

Thanks for writing and sharing.

[the_dead_dream]

Thanks for reviewing. =]

[r_mak]

OMG! I love this! I mean, I probably shouldn't have because Ryan is dead but I absolutely love it. You wrote it magnificently.

It's so sad because Kirsten's afraid of him and even in death he wouldn't hurt her... he just wanted to be where he was the happiest.

*sigh*

I don't think I've ever read a fic that has made me smile and feel sad at the same time. This was so refreshing.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing! =)

[the_dead_dream]

I know but I had to kill him. =)

Thanks for that lovely review.