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the_cephalopod

Dumbstruck - part 4

Feb 07, 2009 10:42

Dumbstruck part 1 is here.
Dumbstruck part 2 is here.
Dumbstruck part 3 is here.

( Dumbstruck part 4 )

mcshep, fic, dumbstruck, established relationship, sga

Comments 122

ratcreature February 7 2009, 19:11:03 UTC

I really enjoyed this.

the_cephalopod February 9 2009, 08:08:20 UTC

Thank you!

michelel72 February 7 2009, 20:05:31 UTC

Intense and affecting. I especially liked the use of Gate translation; the way healing is not immediate; Keller looking about twelve; John's questionable charades; the team each helping in their own ways; the way so many people know of the "secret" relationship; and the fragile, complex relationship between our boys. Well done.

sgamadison February 9 2009, 05:08:07 UTC

Thank you! We tried to envision what Rodney's reaction to Keller as part of the medical team would be (after he got over the 'wow, hot!' phase) and we didn't think it would be all that flattering while Carson was still CMO. :-)

Your FB was was lovely and detailed--food to a starving fanfic writer! Thanks again!

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the_cephalopod February 9 2009, 08:09:56 UTC

Thank you so much! We never seem quite capable of writing something short!! cep xxx

binkii822 February 7 2009, 20:55:42 UTC

That was just wondeful! *hearts you*

sgamadison February 9 2009, 05:03:25 UTC

*big stupid grin*

Thank you!

goddess47 February 7 2009, 21:07:06 UTC

Oohhhh....... John will *always* know Rodney... and Atlantis.... good thing the city likes John right where he is and makes sure that damned Ascension device doesn't get to do its job...

And squishy boys.... eeeeeeeeeeee....... Rodney's right, that would be creepy all the time but good of John to put himself out there....

Such a lovely fic.....

the_cephalopod February 9 2009, 08:10:48 UTC

Thank you so much! You are right - Rodney and Atlantis are where John belongs! *g* cep xxx