HA HA, yeah. Poor Spock-he doesn't know what he's let himself in for with that one. Thanks for reading, I hope you'll check out the next chapter when I post it today. ♥
oohh, this sounds very interesting! Spock is very adorable in this. <3 and I love Jim's attitude! AND BONES! hnnngg, I always need my dose of Jim/Bones friendship in a K/S story. <33
Thanks for reading, I'm very glad you liked it! Jim's got a lot of sass, let's not lie to ourselves; Spock has no idea what he's gotten himself in for. Next chapter will be up shortly, so you won't have long to wait!
AND YES. JIM/BONES = BFFS FOREVER. It's my very favorite thing. ♥
Epic Feedback Part 2rae1013March 1 2011, 19:49:52 UTC
Eager Spock is adorable. Also, you write his POV excellently.
"discreet individual knowledgeable in Human affairs,"
LOLZ! Perfect set-up!
"Well ho-lee fuck, a couch built for two! Ain't these fancy hotels great?" So saying, he swept into the elevator, bypassing the attendant, whose posture abruptly and mysteriously improved. Spock could think of exactly nothing to do except nod at the scandalized couple and follow Kirk into the elevator. The elderly couple did not follow.
Ha! I love that you kept this scene in.
"Is that sarcasm, Spock? Aww, and here I thought you were starting out from square one." Jim felt his smile widen, and he knew his grin was probably verging on "shit-eating," but he couldn't help himself.OMG! They rankle each other already. It's so adorable. True love for sure. I love their banter and reactions to each other
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*snicker at the thought of Spock on a roll-coaster*
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Spock is very adorable in this. <3 and I love Jim's attitude!
AND BONES! hnnngg, I always need my dose of Jim/Bones friendship in a K/S story. <33
I'm already waiting for more! :D
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AND YES. JIM/BONES = BFFS FOREVER. It's my very favorite thing. ♥
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great work, can't wait to see what's next!
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"discreet individual knowledgeable in Human affairs,"
LOLZ! Perfect set-up!
"Well ho-lee fuck, a couch built for two! Ain't these fancy hotels great?" So saying, he swept into the elevator, bypassing the attendant, whose posture abruptly and mysteriously improved. Spock could think of exactly nothing to do except nod at the scandalized couple and follow Kirk into the elevator. The elderly couple did not follow.
Ha! I love that you kept this scene in.
"Is that sarcasm, Spock? Aww, and here I thought you were starting out from square one." Jim felt his smile widen, and he knew his grin was probably verging on "shit-eating," but he couldn't help himself.OMG! They rankle each other already. It's so adorable. True love for sure. I love their banter and reactions to each other ( ... )
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