I think you should pursue more stories over the summer as well!
But... Please check out how to format dialogue. The way you are doing it is very very hard to read. I have a feeling many readers will look at the huge blocks of print that you have now and not even give your story a chance.
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nice work :)
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But...
Please check out how to format dialogue. The way you are doing it is very very hard to read. I have a feeling many readers will look at the huge blocks of print that you have now and not even give your story a chance.
Just a suggestion! :)
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