Comments | the5thmusketeer: Closed Doors and Open Windows (7/9)

the5thmusketeer

Closed Doors and Open Windows (7/9)

Jan 22, 2004 16:35

Title: YOU CAN'T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU WANT …
Author: The Fifth Musketeer
Email: TheFifthMusketeer@hotmail.com
Pairing: B/E, B/C
Rating: NC-17 (language, sexual situations)
Fandom: Everwood
Disclaimer: No, they're not mine. Sue me - I dare you.
Spoilers: We've wandered into full-on AU here kids. While the plots of this series are based around episode ( Read more... )

Comments 8

giftofgab January 22 2004, 18:12:40 UTC

Oh wow. My heart jumped in happiness along with Ephrams at the ending. Too sweet.

yea! finally anonymous January 23 2004, 01:24:10 UTC

finally bright kicked colins ass...i loved it. it was great how protective bright was when colin threaten ephram....it was so cute. can't wait for more

Woo! anonymous January 23 2004, 01:26:25 UTC

Halle-fucking-lujah. I think that pretty much sums up my feelings after reading this.

"makes me wonder what exactly she knows about this sorted little soap opera"

I know you said unbeata'd, but I can't help it; forgive me. You mean *sordid* little soap opera. Again, brava.

Re: Woo! the5thmusketeer January 23 2004, 13:19:06 UTC

I know you said unbeata'd, but I can't help it; forgive me. You mean *sordid* little soap opera

I have no idea what you're talking about.

;)

anonymous January 23 2004, 13:42:32 UTC

ar fheabhas ar fad!

danosulik January 23 2004, 16:40:33 UTC

Wow. This rocks! And I love where you're taking this. It's painful, sure, but it rings true. And your Bright is brilliant.

Part of me hopes her eyes are more open than she wants the world to think. I may not have feelings for her anymore, but I don't want her to get hurt.
"You don't miss a thing, do you, Brown?"

I almost didn't make it to the bathroom before I threw up.
I love that she does know. As she always has. And I feel a twist or two coming on. ;-> (Don't spoil it, I'm just sayin'.)

“But he wasn't cruel. He didn't hurt people for fun. I don't love you. I don't even want to know this person you are now.”
Pow! Right on target! (And that had to hurt harder than any punch. Even though your Colin had it coming.)

It was perfect -- laying intertwined, their breathing falling into rhythm with one-another.
Perfect. Beautiful. Again ... wow!