24Hr Valentines Fic

[thawrecka]

Title: The Grand Masters of Squish
Summary: Um. K-K-K Valentines Days
Notes: For the 24 Hour Valentine's Day Challenge. Not properly edited because I cannot be bothered. 1815 words.
Warnings: Stupidity, sleepovers, lack of plot, Shige/Kusano, Shige/Koyama, mention of Kame/Kusano

acchikocchi | agirlcalledkil | anamuan | devetir | honooko | imwahyou

Comments

[pixisticks]

jsgfkjahsflkfh WHAT XD

NO THAT IS SO NOT FAIR, YOU CHEATER, YOU HAVE TO FINISH IT LAFHALFHKLAFH IHU YOU HAD ME INTERESTED AND EVERYTHING

[thawrecka]

klsdlfj sorry! I really couldn't think of what to write next.

[pixisticks]

IT DIDN'T OCCUR TO YOU TO WRITE THE INEXPLICABLE SEX? *flails*

[thawrecka]

I wouldn't have finished in the time limit if I had.

[tinyangl]

Oh this was SO cute! <3 I really love the dynamic and ;askdjfalsjd So cute. LOL to Kusano trying to convince Shige to kiss him. Subtle. :D

[thawrecka]

I'm glad you liked it! ♥ Yeah, Kusano is so subtle, hee.

[procreational]

"You're just practising so you can look good in case Kamenashi-kun ever returns your passionate love for him."
HAHAHAHAHAHA.

"No! Forget I said that. I didn't say anything. Hey, look at the weather," Shige babbled, panicked.

"Shige!" Koyama gasped, wide eyed.

"I really think those clouds are really interesting," Shige said.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

"Ha! I want a divorce. I don't love you any more," Shige mumbled.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH.

AND THEN THEY INEXPLICABLY DECIDED TO HAVE THE SEX, THE END
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

um wth sup psychotic comment. ♥

[thawrecka]

Haha, glad you enjoyed it. :D

[anamuan]

There was what looked like dried noodles glued on in the top right corner, too.
I thought this line was funny.

He opened it warily. The message read: "Happy Valentine's Day! Hope you're a better kisser now than you were four years ago."
until i read this one.

"Who talks like that?
XDDDDDDDDDDDd

His hair was sticking out all crazy and Shige had the brief thought that Kusano looked like a porcupine. He burst out laughing before Kusano could even reach him.
"Stop laughing!" and "Do this properly!" are also high up on my list of lines that made me giggle madly.

Shige still didn't get what the big deal was. It felt kind of slimy, like a big wriggly slug was trying to enter his mouth.
i. i swear i had a semi!intelligent comment (ok, so not even. but a comment) to make when i pulled this out, but i forgot it by the time i found my comment box. ;___; I'm probably going to remember it in the middle of the night and it'll wake me up and i'll have to come tell you.

"No! Forget I said that. I didn't say anything. Hey, look at the weather,"

[thawrecka]

:D I'm happy you liked it!

Yes, Shige is the smoothest ;). He shows his love through crankiness!

I thought my ending was GEENIUS.

If you ever remember what it is you forget, you have this handy comment to reply to!

[anamuan]

I AM STILL TRYING TO REMEMBER. something to do with the slug. and kisses. j;laj;fajl;ka I DON'T KNOW. ;____; i wish my brain worked.

[thawrecka]

I'm sure it's something deeply profound that you've forgotten. We are all the sadder for not knowing. (Yeah, I don't know who this 'we' is. My comment, it be on crack, yo.)

[ryogrande]

i am fashionably late.

It's not gay if you don't tell anyone.

OF COURSE NOT. everyone should follow kusano's logic.

lol i love this. kusano is such a little shit instigator. i bet it was him who hooked koyashige up in the first place. HEY REMIX.

[thawrecka]

Kusano's logic is the best! He'd totally hook them up just because he'd think it was funny.

I'm glad you like it!