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thawrecka

24Hr Valentines Fic

Feb 15, 2008 12:06

Title: The Grand Masters of Squish
Summary: Um. K-K-K Valentines Days
Notes: For the 24 Hour Valentine's Day Challenge. Not properly edited because I cannot be bothered. 1815 words.
Warnings: Stupidity, sleepovers, lack of plot, Shige/Kusano, Shige/Koyama, mention of Kame/Kusano

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desecrateregret February 15 2008, 07:25:04 UTC

AND THEN THEY INEXPLICABLY DECIDED TO HAVE THE SEX, THE END

...PFFFTTTHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA, YES.

this was really sweet and cute and valentine's day :)

thawrecka February 15 2008, 07:27:45 UTC

Glad you liked it.

jadedfrenzy February 15 2008, 10:08:47 UTC

KUSANO!!! YEY!!! (and I haven't even started the fic yet :D)

You know, usually I'm not a fan of dialogue driven stories, I like narration the most, but yours... yours sucked me in right off the bat. (I'm assuming a lot of this has to do with your writing, and well, because it's SHIGE)

It's not gay if you don't tell anyone.
Best. Reasoning. Ever.

"Wow, you can really see his feelings in this," Koyama said, snickering.
And Kusano was calling Shige a five-year-old.

YOUR ENDING ROCKS BEYOND ALL BELIEF. JUST THOUGHT YOU SHOULD KNOW.
Always leave them wanting more. Check.

thawrecka February 15 2008, 11:01:23 UTC

Kusano is shiny!

I'm not a huge fan of dialogue driven stories but they're what I seem to end up writing when I write quickly. I'm glad you liked it, anyway.

Haha, they're all such five year olds.

GLAD TO KNOW! Hee.

jadedfrenzy February 15 2008, 18:52:55 UTC

I'm not a huge fan of dialogue driven stories but they're what I seem to end up writing when I write quickly. I'm glad you liked it, anyway.
This is one of the reasons why I haven't tried out the 1 hour fic challenge yet. The results may disastrous :D

You have no idea how happy I am that you included Kusano in this. Made my day.

thawrecka February 16 2008, 00:15:48 UTC

If I participated in the 1 hour fic challenge I would probably end up only writing a drabble. XD

I'm glad to hear that! I've been appreciating Kusano a lot more lately.

roughmetal2 February 15 2008, 16:40:25 UTC

awww shige, can't you even do it with anyone else aside from koyama? lolz. poor kusano,no matter how much he teaches shige how to kiss, shige is just too dense to even feel anything. or maybe, he only needs koyama to teach him how <3333

thawrecka February 16 2008, 00:05:24 UTC

Maybe~ Thank you for the feedback.

4_03_am February 15 2008, 22:19:45 UTC

Shige, oh man, I love your Shige.

Also,

"What are you giving me?" Shige asked, finally, breaking the silence.

"I'm giving you my love!" Koyama exclaimed.

"In other words, you didn't actually get me anything. You lied!"

PRICELESS. ♥!!

thawrecka February 16 2008, 00:06:47 UTC

Thank you! I have a lot of fun writing Shige.

ky_rin February 15 2008, 22:35:39 UTC

"But it's fun!" Koyama replied.
Oh, Koyama. THAT IS SUCH WIN. I swear it's like the number one excuse right next to "Because." pffft XD

PWAUAUAHAHA the ending omgwtf that was funny

I LIKE KUSANO. I'M HAPPY YOUR FIC HAS KUSANO.
<333

thawrecka February 16 2008, 00:12:23 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

I LIKE KUSANO, TOO. He should be in more fic.