Sin Eater: New York 1907 (part 5 of 6)

[thatotherperv]

ok I have to post this now before I keep fucking with it and adding to it and I ruin the whole thing. *squints at the changes I've made* I can't keep my fingers out of the dough unless I stick it up here for the world to look at, so I'm taking away the temptation

Comments

[cafedemonde]

Excellent work here. And you didn't muck with it too much at all. I think its amazing.

[thatotherperv]

thank you! that's a lovely compliment. and I'm glad to hear I didn't mangle it with my meddling, haha. it was a possibility

[thatotherperv]

oh, honey! what a lovely comment. thank you so much, really. tell joss he can keep the kiss if he'll write a retrospective sex scene for spike and faith. lmao. (I was just rewatching dirty girls and now I'm all worked up).

I'm so glad you're enjoying this so much!
I'm going to be sorry that it ends, and that Spike is likely to leave Angel
*cough* will he? ;) I can totally see how he might get overwhelmed eventually, but I might have a trick or two up my sleeve :D remember, at the core of the lollipop is the gooey center. lmao.

[incasink]

Ah! This is my favourite chapter too! Well I dont know what happens in 6, so it is my favourite chapter so far.

“Christ, I’m sorry. I’m so sorry, I don’t want to….” Angel drew in a shuddering breath, easing back when Spike started to turn towards him, slowly for advanced warning. Bad to startle him after…the last time he’d taken to the street like a startled deer, Spike barely found him before sunrise

Aww. I love the familiarity in this, in Spike's thoughts. He's been through it before. It's not the first, it doesnt even sound like it's the fifth or tenth time.

but he made sure he bragged to his old sire about the way he glutted more than any one vampire needed to survive. Okay, i admit, I was stupid. At first I thought he was just all neener neener so Angel would get all violent and put out, i didnt realise that he was feeding him too, until I got to that line, so it was like a HUGE reveal for me and I enjoyed it very much

[thatotherperv]

yay for having the same favorite chapter!

yeah, by this point, they've been doing this feed-from-spike thing for *calculates* three and a half years, so I imagine there have been many breakdowns, when Angel is feeling particularly shitty for whatever reason. it's always struck me how infinitely patient Spike was with Dru's madness, even though he had such a short fuse for everything else. I didn't like spike/dru so much as how Spike *was* with Dru...the way he humored her when she saw stars on the ceiling of the factory. I can imagine him coming at Angel's madness differently, but being just as...weeble-like. keeps rebounding, ready to deal with more.

Okay, i admit, I was stupid. At first I thought he was just all neener neener so Angel would get all violent and put out, i didnt realise that he was feeding him too, until I got to that line, so it was like a HUGE reveal for me and I enjoyed it very much!well that was totally the master plan, so that just means that the design of the scene worked :D which makes *me* happy.

[dreamsofspike]

i didn't *really* get it until the "eating for two" line...wow...very intense...and breathtaking in its sorrow and tenderness, in spite of the violence...very well done :)

[thatotherperv]

hee. good to know I tricked you. or strung you along, or what have you.

very intense...and breathtaking in its sorrow and tenderness, in spite of the violence...very well done :)
thank you so much! those are great compliments, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

[woman_of_]

Just as well Spike knows what Angel needs, because Angel doesn't! At least he is getting him to feed now!

[thatotherperv]

yeah, Spike is definitely running the show!