The Dancer - Chapter 2

[thatnobodygrrl]

Leon woke in the morning feeling heavy, and tired. Not an entirely new sensation to him, but still wholly unwelcome. Since he had begun watching The Dancer, sleep had become an increasing luxury for him, one that he couldn’t afford, what with working mornings and all.

Leon was a security guard at a local bank. Not exactly an interesting job,

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[orangehomicidal]

Oh. Shit. Just. Serioiusly. *s'like leon. no coherency* Not after an awesome chapter like this.

“Not addicted,” he muttered, “just dependant. S’different.” He had some issues enunciating before about eleven. … p.m. EPIC LUFFS. THIS LINE WAS PERFECT. Brilliantly executed

[thatnobodygrrl]

Lolz, well as I was finishing that chapter, I realized that I had inadvertently(big words!!!) solved all my problems. So... I won't need to send you like a million drafts XD

And yes, you're right to have some horrible sense of foreboding, because HORRIBLE THINGS WILL HAPPEN!!! **evil laughter**. And I'm glad you liked that line. 'Twas one of my faves, and I was trying to figure out how to make it come out without sounding really stupid... hehe

I'm gonna try and get out another chapter a.s.a.p., although that could take a while. And the next one's going to be from Cloud's POV. I think..... I really want it to be, because I have the plot planned out, but not how I'm going to write it, and I', trying not to dwell on this so I don't have more massive issues.

And yes, feel free to take them all and the universe too. I wanna read this SeiHay story!!!! -sob- Lolz. And how you have /me/ thinking schoolteacher!Leon too.... -sob- Trying to resist the urges here, doll.

Anywayyyyyyy long comment reply, ovah. Thanks for teh epic-reviewingness!