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that_last_stop

Interlude - X Men - NC17

Feb 12, 2010 20:47

Title: Interlude
Pairing: James(Logan)/Victor Creed
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 3222
Notes: This was done for heeroluva, the amazing LJer who won my auction last month at help_haiti. I hope you enjoy!
Summary: Victor doesn't wait six years to find his brother.

( Warning: Incestuous, homosexual relations beyond this point. )

pairing: victor/james(logan), slash, fic, rated: nc17, fandom: xmen

Comments 12

ladyblkrose February 13 2010, 08:25:01 UTC

That was a wild and wicked ride of raw lust and fucked up sibling rivalry. Perfect.
Thank you for sharing

that_last_stop February 13 2010, 08:49:22 UTC

Glad you enjoyed!

heeroluva February 13 2010, 08:44:43 UTC

Wow. It's late so my brain's not totally working, but this is amazing. The characterization is right on, and the little twist at the end, so Victor. I don't have the words to express the awesomeness of this. Thanks so much!

that_last_stop February 13 2010, 08:48:47 UTC

I'm so glad you like it! It's my first time actually writing for X-Men, so I was super nervous that it would fall flat.

heeroluva February 22 2010, 05:05:30 UTC

Nope. Definitely not flat. You captured them amazingly well. You should really share this with the Victor/Logan comm.

that_last_stop February 22 2010, 05:08:32 UTC

There's a victor/logan comm? -interesttttt-

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that_last_stop February 13 2010, 19:21:54 UTC

Woo! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3

rekindle956 February 15 2010, 07:11:26 UTC

I really enjoyed this. Thank you!

that_last_stop February 15 2010, 22:09:56 UTC

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

raven22372 February 16 2010, 12:13:32 UTC

Holy fuck!!! =D

Phew, that was good..! Erm, yes, I know how this sounds. My hopes to become a nice decent girl ever again were shredded. ;) Let me just say you clearly hit my bottom!Victor button and now, twelve hours after reading your fic, it still works! =D

His brother went completely still beneath him, dragging in harsh breaths through his mouth, then his legs spread wide and he let out a deep, throaty moan.
The clear sign of submission went straight to the animal in him, and James picked up an erratic pace of in-out-in-out, fucking Victor hard enough against the floor that the wood croaked in protest.

These sentences followed me around all the night, causing the, umm, strangest reactions... *starts to drool again*

The jungle rot, the land mines, the Viet Cong tunnels of death; through all the horror of death, James was drawn closer to humanity, and was Victor pushed farther away. Hey, That´s an interesting thought (and I mean it as a compliment). I like the idea they ´ve both started at the same point and then ( ... )

that_last_stop February 17 2010, 01:51:40 UTC

Woo! Your review made my day today! Knee deep in septic nasties and then I get this and it just brightens me right up! I'm glad you liked it, and that I was able to offer a unique perspective on the maturation of the boys' personalities. Every author strives for originality, but it's hard to accomplish!

And please, ramble away! ;)

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it, and to write such a wonderful review! <3