aye yae yae... (I SOOOO don't wanna do hw right now...)

Oct 02, 2008 22:23

So when I was walking home yesterday, these words starting flowing through my head. They have a tune, but that's not really important. The important part is that I don't know about the first line. Right now it reads:

Touch me gentle
Hold me tight
I need to know you're
here tonight

Whisper in my ear
Let me hear
you say I love you
say I love you

I can't decide if I want the first word to be "touch" or "kiss", and whether it should be "gentle" or "gently". Thoughts, anyone? If/when I ever finish this, maybe I'll post it all. But when will I have time for writing?

-fin-

music, love, poetry

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