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[FIC] Playful Obsession - 15 pagibig

Sep 18, 2010 14:54

Title: Playful Obsession
Length: [15/16] the eve of the final chapter!
Author: tftcproductions
Rating: PG-13, depends, how strong is your stomach?
Genre: mainly drama
Warning: This fic contains very innocent Jaejoong, Yunho being a dumb-ass, Yoochun being a jackass, & bad language
Summary: A sick letter of a sadistic mans fantasy of love turned the ( Read more... )

angst, jaeho, drama, yunjae, playful obsession

Comments 10

museelo September 18 2010, 09:02:01 UTC

SPOT

museelo September 18 2010, 09:07:44 UTC

OMG This is so intense ;__;
The scene was well described but I think I have to read again to understand fully the situation xD

Anyway, it was really good o.o !
Thanks for this :D

meggyh September 18 2010, 11:11:59 UTC

Crazy psycho!!!!
Touch jae again and i Will tell yunnie to bring tanker to shot you into a Pieces!!

luminaca September 18 2010, 11:52:32 UTC

OHMYFUCKINGGOD ! i felt like i was watching psycho -action movie D; i cud see clearly the scenes thru this, coz you wrote it so damn well.
Oh, bb please update soon. I'm dying to read the last part. Hwaiting ;D

kurochibimask September 18 2010, 13:58:57 UTC

wah!! X3 i've been waiting for this! finally. that was awesome! really can't wait for your next update! ;D

blackcherriess September 18 2010, 16:56:25 UTC

*peeks out from behind a pillow* you're seriously good at writing! the action is just mindblowing (i think you should go film a movie or sth!) and scaryyy ): it's like no, no, david, don't hurt them anymore, then *hit* and ouch! and every time yunho got hit = *cries*

i can't believe that david goes until the extent of intending to kill jaejoong. it's not only if i can't have him, you also can't have him but rather he's still mine when he's dead so don't even think you can have him. that's like so freak-ish! (and if such people exist in real life - which i think they do *faints*)

Yoochun bit his lip, "Junsu, you know it's only the-" Junsu cut him off by wrapping his arms around his torso, his arm trapped in them, and laying his face on his flat chest.
"Please, Chunnie," Junsu's words were muffled by Yoochun's shirt, and the coming of tears, "don't say those things." Yoochun went quiet. His hands came up to rest n the back of Junsu's arms and his head fell to rest his nose in his messy black hair. ♥ this part is really lovely(: i ( ... )