[FIC] Playful Obsession - 15 pagibig
Title: Playful Obsession
Length: [15/16] the eve of the final chapter!
Author: tftcproductions
Rating: PG-13, depends, how strong is your stomach?
Genre: mainly drama
Warning: This fic contains very innocent Jaejoong, Yunho being a dumb-ass, Yoochun being a jackass, & bad language
Summary: A sick letter of a sadistic mans fantasy of love turned the ( Read more... )
i can't believe that david goes until the extent of intending to kill jaejoong. it's not only if i can't have him, you also can't have him but rather he's still mine when he's dead so don't even think you can have him. that's like so freak-ish! (and if such people exist in real life - which i think they do *faints*)
Yoochun bit his lip, "Junsu, you know it's only the-" Junsu cut him off by wrapping his arms around his torso, his arm trapped in them, and laying his face on his flat chest.
"Please, Chunnie," Junsu's words were muffled by Yoochun's shirt, and the coming of tears, "don't say those things." Yoochun went quiet. His hands came up to rest n the back of Junsu's arms and his head fell to rest his nose in his messy black hair.
♥ this part is really lovely(: i really prefer yoochun not vocalising his thoughts in such a situation but well, it really builds up the tension and brings it to the climax rather well. also, junsu here is just awwwww...who won't stop talking and resist such him?
i really hope that david isn't going to get up anytime soon and cause any more blood to flow in the last chapter. you're seriously amazing. everything flows so well and seems so real (until, yes, i was frightened too). this is such an incredible story with a wonderful plot(: can't wait to see everyone happy and recovering/recovered in the last chapter! ♥
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