I want to see Soundwave subjected to the kind of treatment Megatron usually reserves for Starscream.
Maybe Soundwave screws up a mission or the Decepticons lose a battle because of him. When they get back to base, Megatron blindsides him with a vicious beating, then violently rapes him. I'd really like it if someone would write Soundwave struggling and trying to crawl away but physically overwhelmed. Bonus if it happens in public and Rumble or one of the other cassettes flips the fuck out and someone has to hold him back/drag him out of the area to keep him from attacking Megatron. Double bonus if Starscream acts compassionately toward Soundwave when it's over.
Non-sticky is fine, but I would prefer sticky.
Warnings: Violence, Non-con, Sticky, Slash
A/N: Ok, so I lied. Brainz-eating Zombie Bunny would not let me sleep until I wrote this out. I may de-anon in a week or so if you
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Re: When It's You Instead - Part Two
anonymous
December 5 2009, 20:27:34 UTC
Megatron caught Soundwave’s ankles, and jerked him back. Soundwave kicked out, flipping to his back, hands sliding against the deck as he tried to sit, and scuttle away. Another blow to his helm, sent static across his senses, leaving him reeling and helpless to block the beating fists.
Soundwave twisted, fingers clawing at the floor as he tried to squirm away. A brutal punch to the center of his back dropped him. Vents heaving, gyros unable to stabilize, vision laced with static, Soundwave went limp and unresisting. His body throbbed everywhere. There was not a part on him that didn’t hurt. It felt like his armor had been shredded, ripped away.
He could hear Rumble’s muffled shrieks, and his own taxed systems laboring.
Soundwave was flipped to his back, and Megatron leaned over him, face twisted. “You will learn,” Megatron growled, “to never,” Soundwave gasped in shock and pain as Megatron’s fingers dug into, and warped, his interface panel, “charge a weapon for use against me again
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Re: When It's You Instead - Part Four
anonymous
December 5 2009, 20:30:59 UTC
“If it becomes too much, say stop and I will. This can take as long as you need it to.”
Soundwave nodded in acknowledgment, only to jump at the first gentle touch to his inner thigh, and yelp, “Stop!” Starscream’s hand came away instantly, and Soundwave stared hard at the ceiling before nodding his permission again.
He knew what he was doing. He was testing Starscream’s word, and yet could not help himself as the cloth wiped over his valve. It hurt, but more than that, he needed Starscream to stop when he said to. There were no sighs of irritation. No scowls. Nothing, but Starscream’s hand leaving Soundwave’s body as he waited for permission to continue, or for Soundwave to take over for himself
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Re: When It's You Instead - Part Four
anonymous
December 5 2009, 20:55:31 UTC
(not OP) Don't you dare improve it. It's perfect.
But personally I wouldn't be averse to some more aftermath, maybe Screamer/'Wave after a bit of time has passed? It seems a little open-ended (prolly because the awesome ended too soon ;p)
Re: When It's You Instead - Part Four
anonymous
December 6 2009, 03:27:50 UTC
Thank you! And yes, I think there will be more, but that honestly will be a few weeks. Holidays and RL are about to intrude on my writing and reading fun time.
Re: When It's You Instead - Part Four
anonymous
December 5 2009, 23:45:13 UTC
That first part took me by complete surprise. It was so brutal and unforgiving! Almost made me pity Soundwave but, wow. The section where he unconsciously was going to fight back; totally felt the "oh s**t!" moment there. This was so awesomely written I *loved* it beginning to end!
Re: When It's You Instead - Part Four
anonymous
December 6 2009, 01:17:38 UTC
*applause*
This anon didn't notice an overabundance of commas, just a few minor errors in a couple of lines of dialogue which I was was only too happy to overlook because you so thoroughly NAILED the prompt. I'm not the OP, but IMO you delivered on every detail of the request with a precision that's frankly enviable. It's not easy to be both concise AND thorough, especially with someone else's idea, but you pulled it off admirably.
I for one think it's perfect as is. It was short, but satisfying. You fulfilled the prompt so completely, it feels "finished" to me. Well done!
Re: When It's You Instead - Part Four
anonymous
December 6 2009, 03:44:14 UTC
Wow! Thank you for those words of praise!
And before I claim it, I'll be sure to clean it up. There qill be more, but I'm not sure exactly what form it will take. Possibly that of "sequel". We'll see. Looks like my muse wants a new 'verse to play in. =D
Re: When It's You Instead - Part Four
anonymous
December 6 2009, 02:29:03 UTC
*bow down* This was perfectly wonderful! Way better then mine... ^^; And I would love to read a second part of this! Maybe a little seeker love for SOundwave? not only Starscream but the entire Trine? I would love to see this! ANd your writting is better then mine...
Re: When It's You Instead - Part Four
anonymous
December 6 2009, 03:49:51 UTC
*bows back*
And congratulations on your first fic!
If you want, I'll leave some constructive crit once I finish reading yours. I'm by NO means an expert, but like all things, writing takes practice. I've been very lucky and blessed to have thoughtful remarks in the past on how to improve my little craft. I've still got work to do, but I love it.
And hey!! No reading my mind.... LOL. I have toyed with the idea of the whole trine, but that would depend on whether this little ficlet wants to become serious or kinda cracky. =D
Re: When It's You Instead - Part Four
anonymous
December 6 2009, 03:50:23 UTC
*bows back*
And congratulations on your first fic!
If you want, I'll leave some constructive crit once I finish reading yours. I'm by NO means an expert, but like all things, writing takes practice. I've been very lucky and blessed to have thoughtful remarks in the past on how to improve my little craft. I've still got work to do, but I love it.
And hey!! No reading my mind.... LOL. I have toyed with the idea of the whole trine, but that would depend on whether this little ficlet wants to become serious or kinda cracky. =D
http://community.livejournal.com/tfanonkink/491.html?thread=520427#t520427
I want to see Soundwave subjected to the kind of treatment Megatron usually reserves for Starscream.
Maybe Soundwave screws up a mission or the Decepticons lose a battle because of him. When they get back to base, Megatron blindsides him with a vicious beating, then violently rapes him. I'd really like it if someone would write Soundwave struggling and trying to crawl away but physically overwhelmed. Bonus if it happens in public and Rumble or one of the other cassettes flips the fuck out and someone has to hold him back/drag him out of the area to keep him from attacking Megatron. Double bonus if Starscream acts compassionately toward Soundwave when it's over.
Non-sticky is fine, but I would prefer sticky.
Warnings: Violence, Non-con, Sticky, Slash
A/N: Ok, so I lied. Brainz-eating Zombie Bunny would not let me sleep until I wrote this out. I may de-anon in a week or so if you ( ... )
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When It’s You InsteadThe Decepticons flew in silent retreat. All of them afraid to be the one Megatron finally released his seething fury on ( ... )
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Soundwave twisted, fingers clawing at the floor as he tried to squirm away. A brutal punch to the center of his back dropped him. Vents heaving, gyros unable to stabilize, vision laced with static, Soundwave went limp and unresisting. His body throbbed everywhere. There was not a part on him that didn’t hurt. It felt like his armor had been shredded, ripped away.
He could hear Rumble’s muffled shrieks, and his own taxed systems laboring.
Soundwave was flipped to his back, and Megatron leaned over him, face twisted. “You will learn,” Megatron growled, “to never,” Soundwave gasped in shock and pain as Megatron’s fingers dug into, and warped, his interface panel, “charge a weapon for use against me again ( ... )
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Soundwave nodded in acknowledgment, only to jump at the first gentle touch to his inner thigh, and yelp, “Stop!” Starscream’s hand came away instantly, and Soundwave stared hard at the ceiling before nodding his permission again.
He knew what he was doing. He was testing Starscream’s word, and yet could not help himself as the cloth wiped over his valve. It hurt, but more than that, he needed Starscream to stop when he said to. There were no sighs of irritation. No scowls. Nothing, but Starscream’s hand leaving Soundwave’s body as he waited for permission to continue, or for Soundwave to take over for himself ( ... )
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But personally I wouldn't be averse to some more aftermath, maybe Screamer/'Wave after a bit of time has passed? It seems a little open-ended (prolly because the awesome ended too soon ;p)
*bows at your feet*
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=D Glad you enjoyed it!
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This anon didn't notice an overabundance of commas, just a few minor errors in a couple of lines of dialogue which I was was only too happy to overlook because you so thoroughly NAILED the prompt. I'm not the OP, but IMO you delivered on every detail of the request with a precision that's frankly enviable. It's not easy to be both concise AND thorough, especially with someone else's idea, but you pulled it off admirably.
I for one think it's perfect as is. It was short, but satisfying. You fulfilled the prompt so completely, it feels "finished" to me. Well done!
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And before I claim it, I'll be sure to clean it up. There qill be more, but I'm not sure exactly what form it will take. Possibly that of "sequel". We'll see. Looks like my muse wants a new 'verse to play in. =D
Again, Thank you!
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And congratulations on your first fic!
If you want, I'll leave some constructive crit once I finish reading yours. I'm by NO means an expert, but like all things, writing takes practice. I've been very lucky and blessed to have thoughtful remarks in the past on how to improve my little craft. I've still got work to do, but I love it.
And hey!! No reading my mind.... LOL. I have toyed with the idea of the whole trine, but that would depend on whether this little ficlet wants to become serious or kinda cracky. =D
Thank you! I'll review you soon!
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And congratulations on your first fic!
If you want, I'll leave some constructive crit once I finish reading yours. I'm by NO means an expert, but like all things, writing takes practice. I've been very lucky and blessed to have thoughtful remarks in the past on how to improve my little craft. I've still got work to do, but I love it.
And hey!! No reading my mind.... LOL. I have toyed with the idea of the whole trine, but that would depend on whether this little ficlet wants to become serious or kinda cracky. =D
Thank you! I'll review you soon!
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