Transformers Anonymous Writing Feedback Meme

[tf_valentine]

ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

Rules for the meme:

• If you’re a writer, comment to this post with your username.
• Commenters, no drama please. Play like adults. And writers, be prepared for any comment.
• Pimp the meme out by posting the link to your thread into your journal.
• Be honest.

The idea for this fandom specific meme was taken from trivialaffair 's version and

Comments

[sunny_and_sides]

Hmmm...okay...guess I'll go first and comment...

sunny_and_sides here on LJ - also futurecag on both LJ and fanfiction.net

[sunny_and_sides]

Oh you're a awesome writer, i totally adore your stories! You have nice style and great ideas:3 Great job, i hope to read more of your fics.

[sunny_and_sides]

Thank you.

[sunny_and_sides]

Oh you're an awesome writer, i totally adore your stories! You have nice style and great ideas:3 Great job, i hope to read more of your fics.

[anonymous]

I love your fics though sometimes the way you word things can be confusing. And you leave words out sometimes. You've gotten better about this though.

[anonymous]

You have a lot of ideas and you write some really fun stories. Sometimes, though, the wording gets a bit confusing.

[anonymous]

You have lots of creative ideas and it's awesome that you adopt so many bunnies from the TF bunny farm.

Sometimes though your sentences get on the long and wordy side, making them kind of confusing. Long sentences aren't bad at all, but you might want to play around with starting out with short sentences and then going back and joining some where it would work.

It isn't really a problem at all with your stories because the sort of narrative style works for you, but you might also consider playing around with more description, like settings and characters' body language, as well as some figurative language. You have characterization down well, but you could enhance it with more description.

Keep up the awesome writing! The more your write the better you get, whether you like it or not. ;P

[ryukotaicho]

*is intrigued*

S. Phantom on fanfiction.net or SilverPhantom on deviantart.com.

[redseeker]

wolfalice@thepaperhouse

[okamichan]

Oooh! Thank you for this Wildeness! And Purajo for the brainstorming! *<3s and huggles on both of you!*

okamichan, or a variant, pretty much everywhere except deviantart where I'm Jookami

[okamichan]

Heya Okami!
I love a ridiculously huge amount of the stuff you write, and the ideas/concepts/stuffers you come up with are fantastic. By this, of course, I mean concepts when it comes to bonding, hubs, the origins of certain mechs, and all the other little things you throw in. Your imagination shows no bounds.

I think, if I were to say one little itty bitty negative thing, I would say that reading Starcrossed confuses me sometimes. Having multiple storylines criss-crossing around each other with random drabbles thrown in can get a bit disorienting, but, I love it so darn much that, when necessary, I go back and read the last few chapters to orient myself.

[okamichan]

Awww. *hugs* Thank you!

I can understand the drabbles being a tad confusing. It was written as a bit of a one shot at a time. I'm still considering how I can fix this in the final revision, though the only solution may be in keeping a chronological version up.

[okamichan]

I love your fics. Always well written and your fic Star Crossed is one of my all time favs!