Transformers Anonymous Writing Feedback Meme

[tf_valentine]

ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

Rules for the meme:

• If you’re a writer, comment to this post with your username.
• Commenters, no drama please. Play like adults. And writers, be prepared for any comment.
• Pimp the meme out by posting the link to your thread into your journal.
• Be honest.

The idea for this fandom specific meme was taken from trivialaffair 's version and

Comments

[yuuzaiden]

Yuuzaiden and MuzaiandYuuzai @ ff.net

[yuuzaiden]

You spin very intricate tales that are certainly engaging. Your writing has improved in leaps and bounds, becoming tighter and cleaner with details as you progress. I really enjoy reading your stories.
You sometimes have trouble with running sentences, and punctuation can disappear every now and then, but those are little things that can be fixed with more careful proof-reading.

[yuuzaiden]

Above anon is right. When I read the first few chapters of Sparks, and the few most recent, your improvement in style and delivery is obvious. I look forward to seeing how far your potential takes you.

[meallanmouse]

meallanmouse @ haearnmouse on LJ (same username on DW) and lightningmouse @ ff.net.

[meallanmouse]

I truly truly love your writing, you have an excellent knack for characterisation. I've become horribly fond of your OCs as well, which is quite hard to do with me

[meallanmouse]

I think your style flows nicely and gives some wonderful mental images.

[daftedly]

Ooh, this is an awesome idea! 8D

daftpyratelolz here on LJ. (The link goes to the "story" tag on my journal so you don't have to hunt around. XD)

[daftedly]

This fic (http://daftpyratelolz.livejournal.com/73327.html#cutid1) is great, even if it gets a touch creepy and rapetastic towards the end, but for god's sake please don't write Blitzwing's accent phonetically. It grates.

[daftedly]

I love your writing, it sounds so poetic. Regarding some of your work, mostly the music prompts, that sort of style is not always the best way to write them, but it certainly was appropriate for Obscurus Imperator.
Watch out for descriptive cliches, and make sure your write dialogue in their vocabularies instead of your own - this is not really a problem with your stories, but sometimes things slip in that don't sound right. Other than that, keep writing! You have excellent ideas, and I hope to see more of them.

[optimus_life]

Optimus_life here on LJ

[kirin_saga]

kirin_saga here on LJ and on FF.Net. Cheysuli-Night on DA, though I only have less than a handful of my fics there.

[kirin_saga]

I love your fics! You always write them so carefully, and take the time to get into the thoughts and feelings of your characters. Every action has a purpose, and I personally would read anything you ever wrote, whether or not they are my favorite character.

[kirin_saga]

*blush* Thank you!

[sunny_and_sides]

Always love your fics... especially the ones you've written over at the rare pairings site.