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Fic: All Fired Up

Jul 08, 2008 22:48

Title: All Fired Up

Author: tainry

Rating: R

Disclaimer: Characters and concepts copyright HasTak

Warnings: threesome, voyeurism, plug-n-play, explicit robot interface

Prompt: TFA - Sentinel/Jazz/Optimus. Song Wanted: All Fired Up - Pat Benatar. Pre-Earth, Academy or Elite guard days, Elita-1 egging them on maybe?

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method: pnp, continuity: animated, optimus prime, sentinel prime, jazz, rated: r/m, author: tainry

Comments 17

sbx July 9 2008, 15:23:37 UTC

*purrs* Requester here, and let me say that this is just simply yummy. Very nice work.

tainry July 14 2008, 19:46:07 UTC

Yay! Very glad you liked! I had a few days of not having any idea how to do this, but then the training exercise idea hooked me in and off we went. ^__________^

Sorry it took so long to reply, I haven't gotten notifications for this at all...which is the first time LJ's borked up on me like that. Argh!

mmouse15 July 9 2008, 22:33:27 UTC

Wow. That was really awesome, and hot, and I wish I was Elita, to watch such a great smexy sight.

tainry July 14 2008, 19:47:01 UTC

Heehee! Thank you! <3

seiberwing July 10 2008, 00:38:08 UTC

Hot damn. Very nice, and I like the sort of comradely feel you put into it. Is porn, but is emotionally satisfying porn.

tainry July 14 2008, 21:49:53 UTC

Heee! Yay! Thanks!

ouronlyhunter July 11 2008, 11:11:27 UTC

Hot. Very hot. And I really, really like Elita's part in this. I'm usually not a fan of her, but I think she fit so well into this story, giving it another dimension. On one hand, it's a story about friendship and the future (and needless to say robot porn, woo-hoo), and on the other hand...

Elita's certainty is bittersweet, knowing how things end up for at least her and Optimus. It's very teenager/young adult, thinking that they have the world at their fingertips. It adds so much to the story, but doesn't take it over because of it's placement as the last paragraph.

tainry July 14 2008, 21:57:10 UTC

Thankee! ^_^ It's funny how these things evolve. But I'm glad you liked this one. Robot porn is good! But writing a lot of it drives one to find different ways of setting it up and different themes to play with around the periphery. Or something. I'm not at all surprised you picked up on those things, as you have better 'narrative analysis training' than I do. ^^; ::envies::

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ishimura July 13 2008, 18:54:21 UTC

I wonder why that is so.^^

tainry July 14 2008, 22:01:34 UTC

Thankee! <3
Jazz is...huh, y'know I think I access Jazz as being an artist, even if he isn't a musician himself, he has a keenness of observation and a delight in what he observes that I associate with artists. ::only just thought of this consciously::

Funny that, about Jazz and Sentinel. Not sure what's going on there other than Jazz is not one to be bullied around. Which is probably G1 leakage in my mind, but they seem to be hearkening back fairly unabashedly, so I'm not too fussed. ^____^