Fic: All Fired Up

[sunny_and_sides]

Title: All Fired Up

Author: tainry

Rating: R

Disclaimer: Characters and concepts copyright HasTak

Warnings: threesome, voyeurism, plug-n-play, explicit robot interface

Prompt: TFA - Sentinel/Jazz/Optimus. Song Wanted: All Fired Up - Pat Benatar. Pre-Earth, Academy or Elite guard days, Elita-1 egging them on maybe?

2314 words.

Comments

[i_stalk_piccolo]

*drowns in her own drool*

[tainry]

::starts the bilge pumps::
^_________________^ <3

[ishimura]

*fans herself* This was incredibly eroctic and hot, with the right amount of humour. I like how OP seems to be main center of everyone other's attraction.
Sentinel's, for example:
Jazz was a high-tuned ‘Bot always ready for a little cable-tossing, but somehow it was more fun to get Optimus overclocked.

- but Optimus was so responsive right now... Lip components parted, optics vivid, engine revving. It was hard to keep one’s servos off him when he looked like that.

Or Elita's...There was something fiercely exciting about seeing Optimus sprawled inert and senseless, lip components curved in a sated smile.
Having second thoughts, Elita? ;D

And then there is Jazz. I absolutely love what he says to OP before he overloads and it makes me wish to read it actually happen. Please write where Jazz gets OP alone.

The summary of this all was Jazz's line to Sentinel about Elita Wants to hear you shout his name while you can still shout., meaning of course OP, right? :D

[tainry]

Hee! Thankee! Glad you enjoyed it!
I am an unabashed Prime fangirl. Everything's Prime to me. <3

Mmmmmm. Jazz. I will absolutely have to write Jazz getting Opts alone. ::needs to make a list::

Yes! Meaning OP. I hoped that was clear enough. ^^;;;; Thanks for noticing! <3

[ishimura]

Oh YEEEESSSSSSHHH. XD

I know I'm greedy, but there's another line that caught my line and watered my mouth.
Optimus caught himself on his left-side limbs to keep from jarring Jazz, and cried out into Sentinel’s mouth. Such a small taste of Optimus was never enough, but they were too battered for the usual games.
May I ask - *purrs* - what these "usual" games are? Something like foreplay teasing OP? XD

[tainry]

Well, Jazz and Opts did their best to distract me terribly all day long at work. I probably have at least a page or two written once I get it typed into the computer. O.O I'll post it up on tfanimated_fic when it's finished. ^_^ Might be a while since I tend to write slow.

Hmm. Usual games between Sentinel and Optimus, and among the team in general... I would guess yes, involving a lot of teasing and rather rough tumbling about. Sentinel and Optimus are built to take quite a pounding, really, the size they are, and Jazz and Elita are quick and wily.