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January 2012 Challenge- Through Another's Eyes

Jan 31, 2012 17:37

Title: Visibly Invisible
Universe: Generation 1 (sort of AU)
Pairing: Jazz/Bumblebee
Word Count: 1,973
Rating: PG 13
Warnings: Brief allusions to interfacing.
Summary: Mirage thinks it’s all rather obvious, but then he may not really be in a position to judge.
Disclaimer: I do not own Transformers.

AN: Real life has been seriously mean to me this month. ( Read more... )

mirage, format: fanfiction, rated: pg 13/t, challenge: jan 2012 through anothers eye, author: mystical maiden, bumblebee, jazz, continuity: g1

Comments 11

rusty_chevy January 31 2012, 08:24:26 UTC

I... love this on so many levels I don't even know where to start. XD

Just going to add to memories, now...

mystical_maiden January 31 2012, 10:15:23 UTC

Thanks so much! :D

bluebirdsoaring January 31 2012, 14:00:03 UTC

Very, very sweet!!

mystical_maiden January 31 2012, 14:27:51 UTC

Thank you. :)

renegadewriter8 January 31 2012, 14:47:50 UTC

EEEEEEEEE This was lovely great job! ^^

mystical_maiden February 1 2012, 07:24:49 UTC

Heh, thanks a lot. :D

anavidbookworm February 2 2012, 15:22:46 UTC

This was very enjoyable. The idea that Prowl is only interested in Jazz so he can figure out how his mind works made me laugh. And Bee sneaking into the base just to surprise Jazz; that was cute. Thanks for sharing. :)

mystical_maiden February 3 2012, 07:36:09 UTC

Thanks yourself :D.

It was really fun to write actually.

rose0mary February 4 2012, 17:33:23 UTC

Laughing Out Loud.
This is GREAT!
While I do like the occasional Jazz/Prowl fics, they tend to be a bit much after a while.
I'm very glad you found a different way to incorporate both Prowl and Jazz together (mentions only for the 2IC), without them being a couple.
AH, the having it from Mirage's view, made it perfect.
Is there any more to this?
JK. A good story.

mystical_maiden February 5 2012, 07:13:12 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you like it.

I've often been amazed by exactly how many Jazz/Prowl fans there are out there, and wanted to play on the idea that there IS affection, but not THAT kind between them, glad to see it came through alright.

I'd love to say there's more, but there isn't... not at this stage anyway. We'll see, my muse works rather randomly. :D