Comments | tf_rare_pairing: Prime

tanta_green in tf_rare_pairing

Prime

Sep 08, 2009 22:38

( Prime )

rated: nc17/ma, method: holo/human, method: tactile, author: tanta_green, sam witwicky, optimus prime, continuity: bay movies

Comments 8

black_shiro September 8 2009, 18:24:07 UTC

Very nice story, i enjoyed reading it :3

tanta_green September 21 2009, 15:02:31 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you did. :)

mmouse15 September 8 2009, 20:25:39 UTC

*whew* Fans self. That was hawt!

Not the requestor, but really enjoyed the story! I like how Sam could find small crevices in Optimus and get him to overload that way. This may have been outside your comfort zone, but you did a great job with it!

tanta_green September 21 2009, 15:04:37 UTC

Thanks. It really was something I'm not used to. I'm usually one to more explore the emotional side of things, so I wasn't sure how well I'd do with a prompt that was essentially PWP. I'm glad I managed to make it hot in some way. XD

okami_myrrhibis September 8 2009, 20:50:32 UTC

Other than when Prime's yelling "Yes I'm all yours Sam!", I really enjoyed this. That dialogue... just... didn't quite fit.

But Sam's end-comment? peeeerfect!

tanta_green September 21 2009, 15:08:22 UTC

Heh. I'm afraid right then in the middle of the PWP-ness was when my brain was really going 'oh god; what the pit am I writing?' I think I'm just glad I managed to get away with only one OOC line. Also very glad you liked the rest of it. Thanks. :)

optimus_life September 8 2009, 22:10:31 UTC

I'm the requestor. Given you haven't written for this pairing before or story type you did an excellent job.
Congrats.
Loved the comment at the end ;)

tanta_green September 21 2009, 15:06:19 UTC

Oh good. :) It's always nice to know that the requester liked it. I was so nervous that you wouldn't because I really don't write PWPs that often. Thanks.