Cybernetics

[speechie42]

I cannot tell you how proud I am of this chapter. It's so good! That usually means a lot coming from me, I think everything I write sucks ass, so this must be pretty decent if even I approve ^^

Title: Cybernetics (chapter 38)
Rating: R-ish NSFW
Pairing: Barricade/OC
Summary: Natalie is stressed. She makes some bad decisions. Barricade is happy to

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[cazcatharsis]

I had to wait til after work to read this and dammit, it was worth it

heheh. Bart.

and... and... oh gods, you TEASE.
I'm gonna be all screwed up for the rest of the night! hahahaha

[speechie42]

Yes, I'm a very mean girl, I know. Prowl has yet to come punish me though, so I guess I'll have to continue teasing you ^_^

[cazcatharsis]

that's alright, prowl metes out punishment through spankings. hopefully they're inspirational. :P

[speechie42]

Mmmmm...yeah, that's why if I were on the Ark I'd loiter outside his office calling, "I'm making trouble! Rules are being broken! Oh who will stop this madness???"

Of course, I'd also get "injured" a lot just so I could end up in the med bay.

You know, I think us fangirls are worse even than the twins.

[anonymous]

Natalie took a deep, shuddering breath and forced herself to calm down a little. “There. Just...just *breath*.” Barricade soothed, unsure what to say. --just add an "e" and you're good~

Worried he’d *loose* her, he put some distance between them and placed his hands in his lap in hopes it would reassure her he had no intention of touching her when she didn’t want it. --drop an "o"

Natalie sighed heavily. “Why do you call me that? Ratchet already explained to you that ‘fleshling’ *_*a term for human babies.” --I'm gonna assume you're missing an "is"

This whole chapter has the word TEASE written all over it, you keep yanking and we keep waiting! The cruelty of it all! XD

[speechie42]

I know, I know, I'm awful. Don't worry, I'll make it up to you eventually! ^^

Thanks for pointing out the errors.

mooe

[anonymous]

Wow, this is awsome, but where can I read the rest of it?