Comments | tf2007fun: Drabbles

lady_oneiros in tf2007fun

Drabbles

Jan 06, 2008 23:20

Title: Acoustic #3
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Ratchet has trouble with words, sometimes.
Author’s Note: For lyricality. To give myself a break from writing “That Still Small Voice,” I asked lyricality to give me a prompt. She gave me: Ratchet. And the ( Read more... )

poster: lady_oneiros, ironhide/ratchet, fanfiction 2008 (winter), ratchet (07-08), ironhide (07-08), rated pg

Comments 27

lyricality January 7 2008, 04:26:50 UTC

Oh, but I will gladly take the blame for these.

Honestly, I love your work, and these are absolutely no exception. You have a marvelous way of showing, rather than telling, and you make an art out of (as we were discussing earlier) what is not said. Your dialogue is never trite, and you know how to turn things just enough away from the expected. It's not "I love you" and everything is flowers and rainbows. It's "I love you" and let's figure out how to fit this into the everyday realities of life.

I am so pleased and a little giddy and happily thrilled. ♥ *shares her pie with you*

lady_oneiros January 8 2008, 21:02:54 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked them. *big stupid grin* Thank you so much. *enjoys the pie*

calger459 January 7 2008, 04:29:31 UTC

HAHA oh that end was priceless ^_^ Nice Ratchet introspection here, that's an interesting thought on his love of harsh words and cursing. He's so much fun :D

lady_oneiros January 8 2008, 21:03:23 UTC

Thank ya very much! XD Ratchet is fun to work with, even if he can be uncooperative at times.

easterofflesh January 7 2008, 04:29:40 UTC

Poor Ratchet. I like the third part the best though, haha.

lady_oneiros January 8 2008, 21:03:52 UTC

I feel sorry for Ratchet. I torture him endlessly in my stories. Glad you liked it!

sbanchs January 7 2008, 05:02:12 UTC

Holy crap...AWESOME! #2 was heart breaking, though.

Great job with Ratchet's character.

lady_oneiros January 8 2008, 21:04:39 UTC

Thank ya! ^_^ Happy you enjoyed it, though #2 was a little sad. I hadn't meant it to turn out that way, but I just can't help but torture Ratchet. It's like a drug to me, or something.

yuuzaiden January 7 2008, 05:12:54 UTC

That was beautiful..
So well written....
Your skill with words and emotion....that is why you are certinally one of my favorite authors.
Don't stop writing

lady_oneiros January 8 2008, 21:05:13 UTC

Thanks so much! And don't worry, I don't plan to stop writing any time soon. As long as "That Still Small Voice" doesn't kill me, first.