Drabbles

Jan 06, 2008 23:20

Title: Acoustic #3
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Ratchet has trouble with words, sometimes.
Author’s Note: For lyricality. To give myself a break from writing “That Still Small Voice,” I asked lyricality to give me a prompt. She gave me: Ratchet. And the ( Read more... )

poster: lady_oneiros, ironhide/ratchet, fanfiction 2008 (winter), ratchet (07-08), ironhide (07-08), rated pg

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jaxink January 7 2008, 05:54:23 UTC
Ratchet may not have a way with speaking words, but you definitely have a way with writing them. Simply wonderful.

And besides, anything with Goo Goo Dolls lyrics = awesome in my book.

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lady_oneiros January 8 2008, 21:06:02 UTC
Thank ya! XD And Goo Goo Dolls are awesome. I love their stuff, though their latest album wasn't that good. I'll stick with their old music. Glad you liked it!

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umi_mikazuki January 7 2008, 06:51:48 UTC
....

Good fic is good. Very good.

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lady_oneiros January 8 2008, 21:06:22 UTC
Thank you very much! ^_^

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lady_oneiros January 8 2008, 21:09:22 UTC
Thank you! I enjoy working with Ratchet, though he can be stubborn and uncooperative at times. I'm still playing around with figuring out his character exactly, so I'm so happy to hear that I've made him sound believable. Highest compliment ever in my book. ^_^ Here, I tried to give him a sort of autistic element when it comes to communication...he's incredibly intelligent, he just can't pick up on some of the subtleties in conversation that other people can. I'll be writing more, though most of my focus is on "That Still Small Voice." It's a beast, so it tends to eat any drabbles or one-shots I may wish to turn out. ^_^;

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pax_athena January 7 2008, 08:55:09 UTC
Wow, those ones are so strong! I adore your take on Ratchet, the explanation why he is the way he is and what he feels about. The Ratchet&Prime interaction in the second one was great, but the first one was perhaps the best, the language just forces me to read on, whether I have time or don't...

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lady_oneiros January 8 2008, 21:10:02 UTC
Thank you! I've come to really enjoy working with Ratchet. He puts up a fight, but he eventually comes around. ^_^

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mmouse15 January 7 2008, 19:54:42 UTC
I'm stunned. These are...holy smokes...they're AMAZING. You've just completely blown me away.
Thank you. I adore Ratchet (and Ironhide), and I love what you've shown about his character.
Please write a continuation? Pretty please? I'll bake the pie for you. You can share with lyricality if you want...

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lady_oneiros January 8 2008, 21:11:24 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad to see you enjoyed them. XD As for a continuation...well, that pie is very tempting, but I don't want the material to become dried up and redundant. I'll probably put some more drabbles out, but as for a direct continuation...not to sure about that. Sorry!

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