Fic: That Still Small Voice: Chapter Seven

[lady_oneiros]

Title: That Still Small Voice
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Sam has been pulled deeper into the conflict than anyone realized.
Author’s Note: Fun with adjectives. Thanks a million for all the reviews! It means a lot to hear what you guys

Comments

[cazcatharsis]

man, if Sam has to fight so damn hard just to get a word in edgewise... shit, I'd have kicked thier asses a little then let them stew in thier own crap. 'don't want me around? fine, eff you then.' LOL.

[lady_oneiros]

Yeah, Sam has to fight to prove himself, but who doesn't? ^_^ All of the doubt will just end up pushing him to do better, I think. Thanks so much for reading!

[smart_blonde223]

You are a very talented writer! I had never thought about how the Autobots didn't shoot each other up in Mission City. It was a splendid explanation!

I also loved your Wheeljack. He seemed to be the most open one of them all. I didn't want to say human because he's not, but something must have made him and Sam 'click' right? Anyway.

I must admit that my mind went straight down the gutter when I read "Optimus pinned Ratchet to the wall". :O

And I would love to read more. :D

[lady_oneiros]

*blush* Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the explanation on avoiding the fog of war...it took me a while, but I think I got it to work all right.

Ah, yes, Wheeljack. He is so much fun to write, and not surprisingly, the easiest. I guess he's just more cooperative and willing to help me than the other Autobots are.

Gutter mind! XD

I'll have up more as soon as I can. Thanks again!

[calger459]

Woo and the drama deepens! I adore Wheeljack so much, I knew Sam would like him ^_^ He's just one of those 'bots who ends up being BFF with everyone :D I was surprised to see Maggie appear, her character is usually ignored in fanfiction and it's nice to see her here in a believable role (and not paired with Frenzy THANK YOU). Whatever is down in Mexico can't be good!

I like the elaboration on Sam's feeling and troubles here, and Bee bringing him back down to Earth, as it were. Bee might be "young" by Autobot standards, but he is far wiser and more experienced at life than Sam, which hopefully he'll figure out once he gets past his stubborn teenager-ness ;) Which of course also fuels his frustration at being kept "out of the loop" as he sees it. I'm thinking that this time, he's bit off more than he can chew and he maybe will end up wishing he WERE out of the loop by the end of this. I'll wait for you to tell us ;)

Goodness I hope Ratchet and Optimus patch things up soon, they're worse than an old married couple <.< Hey Wheeljack,

[lady_oneiros]

Ah! I always look so forward to hearing from you! ^_^ It makes my day. I'm glad you like Wheeljack. He's a lot of fun to write, and not surprisingly, he's the most cooperative and easiest. That may change in the future as he gets more screen time, but for the time being, he is most accommodating. And it's such fun to write a character who loves everybody and is pretty much universally liked in return. I was a little nervous about bringing in Maggie, since, like most of the other characters, I'm not entirely sure of her personality, but so far she's being good, too. As for her being paired with Frenzy...blech. No thanks. What's happening in Mexico...well, I hope I can surprise everyone. If you want to hear what the signal sounded like, go here: http://www.jb.man.ac.uk/~pulsar/Education/Sounds/sounds.html and click "play" for the very last one listed, and that is the sound they were all hearing

[robin99]

/pets Ratchet

I'm worried about what Sam and Bee will find in Mexico, but I can't wait for the next chapter!