Fic: That Still Small Voice: Chapter Seven

Jan 04, 2008 18:07

Title: That Still Small Voice
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Sam has been pulled deeper into the conflict than anyone realized.
Author’s Note: Fun with adjectives. Thanks a million for all the reviews! It means a lot to hear what you guys ( Read more... )

sam witwicky (07-08), wheeljack, fanfiction 2008 (winter), will lennox, poster: lady_oneiros, bumblebee (07-08), optimus prime (07-08), ratchet (07-08), ironhide (07-08)

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calger459 January 5 2008, 13:47:25 UTC
Woo and the drama deepens! I adore Wheeljack so much, I knew Sam would like him ^_^ He's just one of those 'bots who ends up being BFF with everyone :D I was surprised to see Maggie appear, her character is usually ignored in fanfiction and it's nice to see her here in a believable role (and not paired with Frenzy THANK YOU). Whatever is down in Mexico can't be good!

I like the elaboration on Sam's feeling and troubles here, and Bee bringing him back down to Earth, as it were. Bee might be "young" by Autobot standards, but he is far wiser and more experienced at life than Sam, which hopefully he'll figure out once he gets past his stubborn teenager-ness ;) Which of course also fuels his frustration at being kept "out of the loop" as he sees it. I'm thinking that this time, he's bit off more than he can chew and he maybe will end up wishing he WERE out of the loop by the end of this. I'll wait for you to tell us ;)

Goodness I hope Ratchet and Optimus patch things up soon, they're worse than an old married couple <.< Hey Wheeljack, you got some bombs handy?

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lady_oneiros January 5 2008, 14:30:21 UTC
Ah! I always look so forward to hearing from you! ^_^ It makes my day. I'm glad you like Wheeljack. He's a lot of fun to write, and not surprisingly, he's the most cooperative and easiest. That may change in the future as he gets more screen time, but for the time being, he is most accommodating. And it's such fun to write a character who loves everybody and is pretty much universally liked in return. I was a little nervous about bringing in Maggie, since, like most of the other characters, I'm not entirely sure of her personality, but so far she's being good, too. As for her being paired with Frenzy...blech. No thanks. What's happening in Mexico...well, I hope I can surprise everyone. If you want to hear what the signal sounded like, go here: http://www.jb.man.ac.uk/~pulsar/Education/Sounds/sounds.html and click "play" for the very last one listed, and that is the sound they were all hearing.

I'm glad you liked the interaction of Sam and Bumblebee. It's an interesting dynamic they have, with both being young while at the same time Bumblebee acting as the older, more experienced of the two. I guess that's how he is growing up himself...finding someone to help become an adult themselves. And as for Sam wishing he were OUT of the loop...well, I'll just say he's certainly in for a time of things. ~_^

Unfortunately, I will say that the strain between Optimus and Ratchet is going to only get worse before they can start getting things together. I'm sure Wheeljack will be more than happy to help out. Thanks for reading!

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