D., this is gorgeous. Lonely Oz and trying-to-be-helpful Devon and Angel attempting social skills; the flow is sweet and clear and fast, your dialogue's *stunningly* well-voiced and in-character, and - Jeebus. It's so wonderful.
Didn't really own himself. This is so very beautifully sadly resignedly Oz.
"Dude," Devon said to Angel, "You have no reflection. What's up with that?" Devon was staring fixedly in the rear view mirror. "Know it's not the weed." Everything Devon says in this fic is perfectly Devon, but this? Is just above and beyond the call of Devon. I love it. Its close second is this - Devon pulled back a second, said, "Hey," and sweetly kissed Angel again. - which is so earnestly sexbunny and Devon I can't get enough of it.
"I can't really turn into a bat," Angel said, his forehead wrinkling up earnestly. God, you know he's trying *so* hard. I haven't felt Angel-love like this in far too long - thank you.
Don't own anyone, not even yourself, and it's not the wolf, it's Daniel, Daniel who wants to belong to someone who
( ... )
Amazing how much fun it is to watch dvds just looking at our Baked Boy singing onstage Hell, yeah. And HLoD! I didn't mean actual glue. You got that, right? God, I love him.
Oz sees his twin reflections in Angel's dark, dark eyes. I would *kill* to have written this last line
Remix it, baby. C'mon, you know you want to. I still owe you a flight to Toronto and smoochies for writing "Advantage" with my line. And I wouldn't be writing Oz at *all* if you hadn't encouraged me!
Oh, yeah, Actual Glue. So needs to be a story title.
Mmmmm. I haven't read much Oz fic, but you could convince me with this one. For some reason, the whole pick-up-a-hitchhiker, back-of-the-van-sharing-tokes scene is one that makes me an easy lay, reader-wise - it's such an intimate setting to begin with, private yet not, moving yet still.
Best part:
"Now you're just showing off," Oz says, inhaling. He passes it back to Devon, on the other side of Angel. They were all three lying on the mattress in the back, propped up against the back seat. "Used to think you were interesting before I knew about the undead gig."
Now if that isn't a perfect three stoners getting to know each other in a way that could lead to anything scene, I don't know what is. : ) Looking forward to the what-comes-next.
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Didn't really own himself.
This is so very beautifully sadly resignedly Oz.
"Dude," Devon said to Angel, "You have no reflection. What's up with that?" Devon was staring fixedly in the rear view mirror. "Know it's not the weed."
Everything Devon says in this fic is perfectly Devon, but this? Is just above and beyond the call of Devon. I love it. Its close second is this - Devon pulled back a second, said, "Hey," and sweetly kissed Angel again. - which is so earnestly sexbunny and Devon I can't get enough of it.
"I can't really turn into a bat," Angel said, his forehead wrinkling up earnestly.
God, you know he's trying *so* hard. I haven't felt Angel-love like this in far too long - thank you.
Don't own anyone, not even yourself, and it's not the wolf, it's Daniel, Daniel who wants to belong to someone who ( ... )
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Thanks, dude! I bow to you in all things Oz---and
Devon. Amazing how much fun it is to watch dvds
just looking at our Baked Boy singing onstage.
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Amazing how much fun it is to watch dvds just looking at our Baked Boy singing onstage
Hell, yeah. And HLoD! I didn't mean actual glue. You got that, right? God, I love him.
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I would *kill* to have written this last line
Remix it, baby. C'mon, you know you want to. I still owe you a flight to Toronto and smoochies for writing "Advantage" with my
line. And I wouldn't be writing Oz at *all* if you hadn't encouraged me!
Oh, yeah, Actual Glue. So needs to be a story title.
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I wanted to *be* there when Angel leaned in to kiss Oz. I want to know what happens next. . .
Wade deeper in those slashwaters, baby. Please. We'll all be there to help you keep swimming, specially with stories like this to read.
::hugs you::
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didn't I get both Dave and Seth? Yum!
Appreciate your comment! It's like a whole new world, wolfboy slash. I will try to keep wading in the waters.
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Gently sweet and sad and lovely.
Thank you for sharing this one.
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Thanks, dear fangirl!
I look forward to more of your time
with (sigh) Dave.
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Deeper?
Well, my muse is---shy! That's it! All shy here
in Alabama.
I squee like a fangirl from hearing from you and
my other favorite authors!
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Best part:
"Now you're just showing off," Oz says, inhaling.
He passes it back to Devon, on the other side of
Angel. They were all three lying on the mattress
in the back, propped up against the back seat.
"Used to think you were interesting before I
knew about the undead gig."
Now if that isn't a perfect three stoners getting to know each other in a way that could lead to anything scene, I don't know what is. : ) Looking forward to the what-comes-next.
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