Comments | tesla321: Fic: No River (1/1)

tesla321

Fic: No River (1/1)

May 18, 2004 20:17

A little third season Oz/Devon/Angel.
Yes, I'm, uh, wading slowly into the slash river.

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Comments 28

Uncontrollable fits of squee dessert_first May 19 2004, 14:51:35 UTC

Eeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!! You wrote Oz/Devon/Angel! I lurve Oz/Devon with a deep and abiding lurve. Your story was so very good, and the voices were so very on, and the pitch-perfect hit of "Daniel". All so deft and poignant... gonna feedback properly when I get home from rehearsal, but just know that I absolutely loved it.

Wading into the slash pool--hah! Come to the darkside...

Re: Uncontrollable fits of squee tesla321 May 23 2004, 19:44:21 UTC

Yay! Squeeing, as Scy says, is of the good! Thanks so much!

Re: Uncontrollable fits of squee dessert_first May 26 2004, 20:35:39 UTC

Okay, here's what I wanted to say: this was mature and lovely. All the carefully layered details, from the atoms in Oz's body jostling all the way through to the realization of seeing himself--and only himself--reflected in Angel's eyes. Great images. Loved your gently solicitous Devon, humming and drumming and kissing and talking and not getting any of it quite right, but blissfully unaware of it, both perceptive and clueless. Mysterious!hitchiker Angel was terribly intriguing, and his own unexpected perceptiveness endeared him to me. And of course your Oz, lost and angry and unable to give voice to his anger. Feeling the wolf and the implications of not owning himself, both in the philosophical terms I can well believe Oz would get into, and in the sense of that tresspassing "other" sharing his body every month.

And the absolute perfection of "Dude. You have no reflection. What's up with that?" cracked me up, as did "Angel would have been the best prom queen ever".

Thanks for sharing this.

Re: Uncontrollable fits of squee tesla321 May 26 2004, 20:49:41 UTC

Aw! Thank you very much! I was playing around with the first couple of paragraphs, then I realized that I needed Devon, to bring on the mellow. I adore Oz, adore him, he's the guy I would have followed around in high school---but nothing, but nothing gets past my Angel love.( I
got an e-mail from someone saying, "Does Angel know you're cheating on him with Mulder?") So I'm
terribly pleased I was able to endear him to you.

Yeah, I liked my Prom Queen line too.

Whatcha writin'?

eccentrici May 19 2004, 22:06:12 UTC

First, writing a great Oz/Devon puts you on my list of people that I will love for all eternity.

Second, what a lovely, sad story. Poor Oz. I will comment more later once I've had more than 3 hours of sleep.

tesla321 May 23 2004, 19:44:52 UTC

Is it a long list?

Thanks!

dolores May 20 2004, 16:45:15 UTC

Wade more! Because this was really super sweet. Baked Devon, stoned Angel and jealous Oz are so my new OT3.

There's a sequel to this, right? Please say there is...

tesla321 May 20 2004, 17:12:43 UTC

Thank you so much! I don't know how stoned
Angel is going to get in future, but I thought it
was worth exploring!

trishabooms October 31 2004, 07:02:00 UTC

I don't know how I missed this. It was wonderful, and so is the sequel!
Thank you.

kaydee23 October 31 2004, 07:09:43 UTC

Wow wow wow. I've never thought a lot about Oz and Angel or Angel and Devon, but now you have my thinking all kinds of interesting thoughts. Angel is sooooo beautiful, how are they both going to resist him.

I liked the Prom Queen reference. Angel was able to put Devon off with hurting Devon's feelings. (Even though Angel didn't know he couldn't do that to Devon, anyway) But Angel is just very cool.

Loved this. Off to read the second one.