FIC: Surface Wash Only

[teru_bozu_ebi]

Title: Surface Wash Only

Pairings: Nii/Bunny

Rating: NC-17

Warning: Yaoi. Rabid misuse of a plushie.

Summary: Ooh, what a little moonlight can do…

Disclaimer: Hers, not mine. Blah blah blah and all of that.Yes, for the truly attentive and well-read, Nii does indeed cite both Salomé, a Tragedy in One Act and alludes to Little Black Sambo all in

Comments

[tj_dragonblade]

*mad grin* I knew this was yours. Or at least I had really really firm suspicions, anyway. ^_^;

Off to re-read properly.

[jedishampoo]

OMG, I had those same suspicions. ;)

I'm really glad you changed the pairing! Yeah, he had Koumyou/moon metaphorically in mind, but his running internal commentary on Bunny really made it for me, I think. And you totally went there. Very clever, absolutely naughty and fucked-up and brilliant. Seriously, I fear for you because you have Nii/Ukoku down sooo well. Great job and congrats!

[teru_bozu_ebi]

Yeah, I couldn't qualify for the challenge under the Nii/Bunny pairing, so it had to be changed.

And I have to admit... it was really kind of weird, going there, as you say. Plushie porn from Nii's POV? Weird, weird head space. Plus, Nii might be fucked up, but he's an immensely intelligent kind of fucked up, so an interesting enough head to get into. You know he's thought his world view through thoroughly, and somehow he comes out so carefully, correctly wrong despite it all.

Though I totally agree with him in his assessment on the differences between light and dark. There's no yang without yin. In the darkness, you learn to feel your own way in the world.

*wonders if she shouldn't fear for herself*

[teru_bozu_ebi]

*shakes head and grins* I've been told the UPS thing was a dead giveaway.

[yasashii_kawa]

wow. just...wow. this was awesome! im a little concerned about how much i liked bunny!smex, actually haha. i agree with jedi, you totally went there and did it brilliantly and made it incredibly insightful and even humorous. Nii is a sick, sick bastard and i loved every second of it ^^

congrats on the win!

[teru_bozu_ebi]

*lol* Well, thanks! Hell, if your simple *liking* of bunny!smex is an item for concern, what does that my *writing* of the same?

I don' think you need to worry until your plush toys start shaking whenever you enter the room. Then, they're telling you something you need to listen to. ^___^

[lillypuff]

YOU WIN XD (Well, obviously you did, but you are now my hero).

I totally spaced this recent challenge, but now I'm glad I did because nothing I could have written would have stood up to this totally fucked up, but absolutely fantastic piece of fiction.

I loved it!

[teru_bozu_ebi]

^__^

Thanks!

... yeah, "totally fucked up" seems to be becoming a theme of sorts. In my anonymous feedback I got "pretty messed," "fucked-uppery," "strange," "twisted," "deeply disturbing," "creepy..." Unmitigated praise, all!

*lol* I think the win was really half kudos that I actually dared to write something this "ewww!"

*has just realized she hasn't read any Nii/Bunny porn before now*

... hasn't *anyone* written a Nii plushie fic before? Do you know of any out there?
*is suddenly kind of curious*

[tj_dragonblade]

I can point you to one other, at least.

[teru_bozu_ebi]

Ooh, thanks! I know Madhumalati also did one that was porn-free and from Bunny's POV, but still Nii/Bunny. I think we have a budding new genre here!

[whymzycal]

I am madly in love with this. Madly in love. Nii/Bunny Doll(Koumyou-the-moon) is the winningest fucked-up pairing in the universe, and this fic is everything wrong (and right) about it. Your Nii voice in particular is just so creepy and wonderful.

Truly. Don't ever stop with the wrong, okay? It just wouldn't be right if you did.

[teru_bozu_ebi]

Um, ok. No stopping the wrongness.

[whymzycal]

\o/ WIN FOR US!

Er, I mean, that's too bad...

[tj_dragonblade]

Love this. With an unsettling, unhealthy sort of love. ^_^; Nii is so effing twisted, so obviously vastly intelligent and yet completely bonking insane at the same time. Except I'm pretty sure at least part of the cracked-in-the-head-ness is an act, but there's no telling how much or which bits anymore. I've missed this Nii so much since he resumed his Ukoku role, and I'm really disturbed delighted at how well you've nailed him. ^_^;

Poor Bunny. ^_^ I've seen it done before, but this just puts so many layers of subtext and complexity and metaphor-by-proxy and underneath-the-underneath on it. God. I really do love you for this. ♥

Also? Gut-bustingly funny, the flow of Nii's thoughts. Cream-of-Youkai soup to UPS/FedEx to Princess Lab Rat to 'pass me the gravy' and all. I'm amused and disturbed and titillated all at the same time and Nii. Only Nii. I'd rather forgotten how much I do love him.

Thank you, and congrats on the win. This is an awesomely wrong thing of beauty. ♥

Also: at least he had convinced the

[teru_bozu_ebi]

Oooh, thanks for the "waive" catch. Otherwise I'd have come across it months from now and get totally pissed at myself for not catching it sooner.

*lol* You're not alone in the discomfort at enjoying this thing (see other comments above). Try having written it; there was more than one time I sat back and said, "My lord, first I was researching biological engineering for a fan fic. Now, I'm polishing and editing plushie porn so it 'flows better