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FIC: Surface Wash Only

Feb 08, 2009 19:58

Title: Surface Wash Only

Pairings: Nii/Bunny

Rating: NC-17

Warning: Yaoi. Rabid misuse of a plushie.

Summary: Ooh, what a little moonlight can do…

Disclaimer: Hers, not mine. Blah blah blah and all of that.Yes, for the truly attentive and well-read, Nii does indeed cite both Salomé, a Tragedy in One Act and alludes to Little Black Sambo all in ( Read more... )

nii, fic, minuswave, bunny, saiyuki

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tj_dragonblade February 9 2009, 02:26:03 UTC

*mad grin* I knew this was yours. Or at least I had really really firm suspicions, anyway. ^_^;

Off to re-read properly.

jedishampoo February 9 2009, 04:08:22 UTC

OMG, I had those same suspicions. ;)

I'm really glad you changed the pairing! Yeah, he had Koumyou/moon metaphorically in mind, but his running internal commentary on Bunny really made it for me, I think. And you totally went there. Very clever, absolutely naughty and fucked-up and brilliant. Seriously, I fear for you because you have Nii/Ukoku down sooo well. Great job and congrats!

teru_bozu_ebi February 9 2009, 06:21:25 UTC

Yeah, I couldn't qualify for the challenge under the Nii/Bunny pairing, so it had to be changed.

And I have to admit... it was really kind of weird, going there, as you say. Plushie porn from Nii's POV? Weird, weird head space. Plus, Nii might be fucked up, but he's an immensely intelligent kind of fucked up, so an interesting enough head to get into. You know he's thought his world view through thoroughly, and somehow he comes out so carefully, correctly wrong despite it all.

Though I totally agree with him in his assessment on the differences between light and dark. There's no yang without yin. In the darkness, you learn to feel your own way in the world.

*wonders if she shouldn't fear for herself*

teru_bozu_ebi February 9 2009, 05:49:19 UTC

*shakes head and grins* I've been told the UPS thing was a dead giveaway.

macavitykitsune February 9 2009, 13:00:43 UTC

Yes, it totally was. Sorry, but it was a real "Ebi wrote this!!!!11!" moment.

tj_dragonblade February 10 2009, 04:14:17 UTC

The note re: citations and allusions perked my suspicions initially. ^_^; Then there was Cream of Youkai Soup. And UPS. And one too many devoured FedEx couriers. Not to mention the snarky irreverantly irritated tone. *g* 'Tis not a bad thing that you've got a distinct and unique style. ^_^

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