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Quarantined (6/6)

Apr 21, 2012 23:27

Title: Quarantined
Character/Pairing: Wash/Elisabeth (friendship), Wash/Taylor, Jim/Elisabeth, Mark/Maddy, Skye/Carter, Mira/Guzman
Word Count: ~2300 for this chapter, ~14800 for entire story
Genre: Romance, Drama
Rating: PG-13
Summary: As far as she’s concerned, he’s never allowed to set foot near one of Malcolm’s research projects ever again.
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pairing::guzman/mira, character: malcolm wallace, character: alicia washington, character: skye tate, pairing::alicia/nathaniel, word count: 10000-19999, character: guzman, character: jim shannon, character: mira, author: jbn42, character: carter, character: nathaniel taylor, .friday fic challange, pairing: f/m, rating: pg-13, pairing::skye/carter, authors: g-m, character: elisabeth shannon, pairing::elisabeth/jim

Comments 10

bellebby April 22 2012, 05:32:52 UTC

Can I say that Ive been a bad girl and i havent reviewed any posts for this story?? *yes she says guiltily* BUT I LOVVVVEEE IT, especially this chapter, it was my favourite.

I loved Wash's thoughts and Taylors confessions about Ayani.

BAHHHHH it was so good. Amazing job, I want another story in this storyline, PRETTY PLEASE *gives you my best puppy dog face*

jbn42 April 23 2012, 01:59:16 UTC

Aww! Thanks, and no worries about the reviews. : ) I'm sure there will be more (I have two in my head right now)!

mikaelaprime April 22 2012, 05:40:29 UTC

Love this ending. Taylor's explanation of how he felt when he first met her and how things between them might've been different if he hadn't been with Ayani was very realistic. He did love his wife but you can see how he could've loved Wash too. A very nice way to wrap up a very nice fic :)

jbn42 April 23 2012, 02:48:35 UTC

Thanks a lot - I really like hearing that this rang true to you for them!

makesometime April 22 2012, 09:51:00 UTC

One of the most beautifully written explanations of the course of their relationship that I've read, I think. A great ending to a fabulous story :)

jbn42 April 23 2012, 02:58:22 UTC

Wow, huge thanks for that. The end had been bopping around my head since I started the story - I could just feel how upset Wash would be by the situation, and the conversation grew from there.

morganel April 22 2012, 15:38:51 UTC

There is a little person in my head screaming pounding and sobbing, then another than is drowning in adorable, then another that wants to hug you.

Now that the imagery is done. Can I have Gracie? That was positively perfect, no doubt, P-E-R-F-E-C-T-I-O-N okay? That was the perfect mix of sexy, and heartfelt and loving. And that little thing about Guz proposing to Mira I MELTED with gleeee!

jbn42 April 23 2012, 03:00:37 UTC

Hee! Thanks so very much, and thanks for the prompt that made this one happen. And I'm with you - I thought up Gracie, and now I really just want to hug her.

And I also bought my own little Bug a stuffed dinosaur today. As I was paying, I thought to myself, "Projecting much?" : )

losthaven April 22 2012, 22:49:30 UTC

I agree with Morganel. That bit about Guz proposing to Mira gave me such a goofy smile that people were looking at me weird ( ... )

jbn42 April 23 2012, 03:08:39 UTC

I can totally see what you mean about the Guz/Mira tension - if nothing else, I don't think the show did anything that would make it unrealistic (except the criminal underuse of Guzman in general ( ... )