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zapf_chancery in terranovafanfic

The Stars Are Sending You A Sign

Apr 18, 2012 16:49

Title: The Stars Are Sending You A Sign
Characters: Ayani, Wash, Taylor, Lucas
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 12184
Genre: drama
Spoilers: season 1
Summary: A broken woman without a home tries to find a place she can be free finally.
Author's Note: (stolen from sky_kiss): 'from the original draft of Terra Nova in which Nathaniel was a psycho with a god complex named ( Read more... )

author: zapf_chancery, authors: t-z, character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, rating: pg-13, word count: 10000-19999, character: others, character: lucas taylor

Comments 7

goblin_dae April 20 2012, 22:18:32 UTC

Yeesh, that was amazing! Heart-rending, emotional, bittersweet, and mostly for a character and universe that you guys have created from the ground up, from a name in a script. That's awesome. This Ayani is such a poor broken doll - really, it's impressive how hateful a character you make Frank considering he's not even in this.

And she's ripe for Lucas' clingy manipulative mommy issue bullshit, which you wrote PERFECTLY, the poor woman. His death, even though we all hate the bastard, was horrible and came across as tragic through Ayani's eyes.

<3 Nathaniel letting Wash know he chooses her, tucked in bed with the two women he loves. And love the hint of the new, stronger Ayani coming through in the end when they have their conversation. It's great. You're great. I know on Twitter you really wrestled with this monster, and I don't blame you, but it's FANTASTIC! You did a terrific jpb!

scarletalpha April 21 2012, 15:30:44 UTC

Being shoved right into the story just like Ayani was into the new world. Great parallel ( ... )